im no mc

dj raptor

but i was bored so here ya go:

Listen carefully as I spit simile after simile,
Lyric after lyric until you know all about me,
I'll tell you straight away that I'm heavy like metal,
My lyrical style is hot like a tea kettle,
The words flow together like a winding stream,
And when you see me, like smokin beats, you'll think it's a dream,
I'm an original nutter like shy FX,
And I speak with my fists, like terminator X,
So all haters better realise I'm a killer like bone,
And I know what's up just like Donell Jones,
Let me tell you bout the unknown, like mark B and blade,
And like ma$e, I'm in it to get paid,
I'm in control, like Zeus the Greek god,
But don't think I'm gona save your life like Todd,
You know I’m logged on like elephant man,
Like GC I’ll tell you all my master plan,
I do it for the love of the game like jazzy Jeff,
But like Nas I watch out for the cousin of death,
Like Jennifer Lopez, I know how to play,
I’ve got money to burn, like TOK,
Everybody stand clear like MOP,
I’m a $$$$ing alcoholic like X to the Z,
Like earth wind and fire lets groove tonight,
And everybody shout booo like dynamite,
Let me take a snapshot like Roni size,
Other emcees make me laugh like Morecambe and Wise,

/\ ran out of ideas there. might do more later

Exzes

not bad, you got one of those aa,bb,cc rythms going on though, and although similies are good, there is such a thing as too many. try to avoid typing 'like' in the majority of lines.

oh $$$$$$$s, i just read the first line, can't be $$$$ed to delete the thing i typed before though. there are ways to work similies in without using 'like' though

dj raptor

lol yeh i was going for all similes but the like was a bit repetative i know... erm... how else can i do similes? <---$$$$ at english

dj luders

Nice one raptor, but wait a minute hey,
I jus like u not an MC jus a DJ,
But i can spit the lyric when i comes to the slay,
But if i done it for a lifestyle i wouldn't get pay,
Cause im $$$$ as an MC, but can make up sum chats,
Better as a DJ, but been told me chats are phat,
At my PC is where i first sat,
And rolled my first set of lyrics n sounded like a prat,
So i gave it up and help a mate through,
Cause he came to me and asked how to do...
To chat like an MC, he didn't no wot to do,
So i gave him sum tips n stoped him feelin blue,
Now hes a bad boy chatta, called Void MC,
Since the beginin of dis year he has came to be,
A boy with the best flow since PSG,
But now i stick to DJ'in, n leave it to da pros,
An jus keep it up on da turntables,
do dis for fun, n serious bout da labels,
but wen i do this its a story it tells....
RESPECT , Gud luck for da future raptor

MC Makka

Nice luders nice

MC Makka

Be they way i was not bein sarcastic

dj luders

Cheers kama, but im sure yu better mate