im a dj but i wrote dis verse

DJ Enta-T

as a kinda freestyle, couldnt come up with this on the spot but it took me bout 5 minutes in reply. first proppa verse i wrote. feedback

shinobi, so wots with all this kung fu $$$$,
the rhymes u spit, they jus a dribble, is that it?
the centre of ur words like ur last bird i split
ur reputation of gettin murked u fit
Ull get cut by my sharpened verbs, im yoshimitsu
with my high grade, stanley knife blurb i sliced ur $$$$$ too
im more manly, ur more like my wife, its why ur gettin slewed
bite the curb mutha$$$$a, to kill im in the mood
ill drop george dubya bombs on ya manor, tho its not iraq
ur not even in the race, way off track
ur rhymes wack, complexity u lack
malevolent word, dropped all ur herd, so now u aint the leader of no pack
im the poacher, ur stuck in my sight
the eggs on ur face, the hairs crossed, and so are ur eyes
relax, ur uptight like ur flies
wit ur oriental disguise, get exposed before i summon sunrise
my power pon mic comes as no surprise, im manic
sink u wit ice cold flows like titanic
abandon ship but wheres ur lifeboat, start to panic
the drawbridge is up and the moat u never swam it
im medievel, or just evil, insane
ill drop u like a pack of cards, call me david blaine
u want someone to blame, but ur rhymes so lame
u lack aim, im the lion of this ring but too hard to tame