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Old 03-03-2006, 07:11 PM   #1
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i stop for a moment an try to regain my flow
then it crosses my mind,sh*t where did these years go?
it's been 2 already, can't believe that i've made it-
but i managed to pull through and i wouldn't trade it
-coz i learnt some valuble lessons-
an since we're here, i think it's time that i share my confessions...

ma i write to you about my time since you've left
i feel i need to do this coz i got sh*t on my chest
and i need to rest, put all my thoughts and fears to sleep
i need to live again, ma it's my turn to reap
i start to weep, my tears are makin the ink run
i just can't take it, my eyes don't even blink none,
so i fake it, by turnin to my henry of green
i know drugs ain't the answer, but sometimes dats how it seems
been workin every hour god sends me, im beat
an whass it come to? im smokin joints up my street
i cant believe it, i really thought i was through this
but i'm strong, yeah, i know i can do this

still workin on dis $$$$ but anyone got any crits?
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Old 03-03-2006, 10:16 PM   #2
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so far i think this is deep, nicely portrayed ur emotions n dat....


keep it up mos deff..................real

my advice.....finish the whole thin ...then it can b analysed better,,,,innit
so finish it off first

overall im feelin dis......... gud topik.

wer teh rest of me gurlzzzzz....start droppin
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Old 04-03-2006, 09:42 AM   #3
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Originally Posted By: I-RoNiK

i stop for a moment an try to regain my flow
then it crosses my mind,sh*t where did these years go?
it's been 2 already, can't believe that i've made it-
but i managed to pull through and i wouldn't trade it
-coz i learnt some valuble lessons-
an since we're here, i think it's time that i share my confessions...

ma i write to you about my time since you've left
i feel i need to do this coz i got sh*t on my chest
and i need to rest, put all my thoughts and fears to sleep
i need to live again, ma it's my turn to reap
i start to weep, my tears are makin the ink run
i just can't take it, my eyes don't even blink none,
so i fake it, by turnin to my henry of green
i know drugs ain't the answer, but sometimes dats how it seems
been workin every hour god sends me, im beat
an whass it come to? im smokin joints up my street
i cant believe it, i really thought i was through this
but i'm strong, yeah, i know i can do this

still workin on dis $$$$ but anyone got any crits?


Your Verse is sikk still, nice way to show ur emotions,
but one thing LUICS GARCIA IS.........BOOO
where my MAN UTD fans at.....
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Old 04-03-2006, 12:58 PM   #4
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its alright i like it, nice emotions. but i duno like,do u say it fast or slow, was abit hard to pick up the flow. to me. nice choice of subject. but finish it. foreal

peace
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Old 05-03-2006, 02:11 AM   #5
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thumbs up man u

MAN U FAN = RIGHT HERR LOOL altho dont watch much now so, but sik still
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Old 05-03-2006, 06:26 PM   #6
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thanks for checkin it out, im addin 2 it slowly as tings come to me,

hey i said crit the rhyme not the signiture!!!!! LIVERPOOOOOOOOOOL an luis garcia is well fit!

come on the match on wednesday benfica bend over and get your arses KICKED by the pool!
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