Gunpowder Fingers

DarkHorizon

These lyrics have been taken off...too use against those that want to get hurt

p.s its called developing rhymes

I-RoNiK

you structure aint very good - makes it v. difficult to read and your bars are quite long. If you fixed it up could be good.. ya rhymes arent bad an the first line is hevi!

DarkHorizon

DarkHorizon

j-kid1

like ironik sed ur structure aint gud, and that first bar was sick, a bit basic in ur rimes in some places, no point makin bars about gunz if u aint packin nuffin but it was still gd tho gd work blad

DarkHorizon