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Old 12-01-2006, 04:48 PM   #1
DustySkidz
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I SEE MORE PEOPLE TALK $$$$ THAN THOSE CHART HITS, LIKE THEY, STRAIGHT OUTTA LONDON CLAIM THEY THUGGISH,
WHY YOU THINK YOU LEFT IF SO HARD IT'S, THE CAPITAL CITY,
SO YOU GUTLESS,
NOW THEY COME DOWN, TO MY HOME TOWN,
CLAIMING THAT YOU HARD,PUTTIN' DOWN MY TOWN,
IF YOU HATE IT SO MUCH THEN GET OUT MY TOWN,THERE'S THE DOOR MOTHER$$$$ER I AIN'T CLOWNIN' NOW,
YO, I HAD IT UP TO HERE WIT YOU DISSIN' MINE, ALL Y'ALL THE REASON I AIN'T HAD MY TIME,
YOU'RE THE TYPE TO CLAIM HIP-HOP BUT YOU'RE ALL TALK FOOL,
WE CAN FIST AND FIST SO PUT DOWN YOUR TOOL,
YOU KNOW THE RULES,
THE ONE WHO GET DOWN GETS SMACKED DOWN,
OH? YOU GOT ON FUBU, SO WHAT? YOU RAP NOW?
YOU'S A FAKE MOTHER$$$$ER FROM AROUND THE BLOCK,
NOW YOU'S A $$$$,STOPPING MY FLOW LIKE BLOOD CLOT,
I'LL BE SPEEDING THROUGH WHETHER YOU LIKE IT OR NOT,
MOST OF Y'ALL STRAIGHT FAKING WHILE YOU CLAIMING HIP-HOP
WHERE'S THE PROOF THAT YOU KNOW HOW TO PARTY AND FLOW?
PLAYA HATER,YOU'LL BE TRIPPING WHEN YOU COME TO MY SHOW
ALL Y'ALL'S THE REASON WHY THIS TOWN IS DEAD,
LIKE YOU ALL PUT BULLETS IN THE SIDE OF IT'S HEAD,
HEARD WHAT I SAID?
NOW IF YOU GONNA RUN OUT YOUR MOUTH I'LL BUY YOUR ASS A TRAIN TICKET, GET THE $$$$ OUT MY HOUSE!
WHAT!

(cHORUS)

IF YOU'RE GONNA DISRESPECT MY TOWN,
YOU'D BETTER NOT,
COME,
HERE,
NO,
LONGER

SO THINK TWICE BEFORE YOU OPEN YOUR MOUTH,
I'LL BUY YOUR ASS A TRAIN TICKET,
GET THE $$$$ OUT MY HOUSE!
YOU DON'T WANNA DISRESPECT MY TOWN,
COS YOU GONNA,
MAKE,
MY,
RAGE,
STRONGER

SO THINK TWICE BEFORE YOU OPEN YOUR MOUTH,
I'LL BUY YOUR ASS A TRAIN TICKET,
GET THE $$$$ OUT MY HOUSE!

WITHOUT OFFENDING ANYONE ON THIS RAP SONG I SINGS, I DIDN'T ASK ANY Y'ALL TO MOVE DOWN TO HASTINGS
SO AT THE SAME TIME MY TOWN AIN'T SOMETHING TO PEE ON, THEN GO TO THE BEACH,RELAX AND GET YOUR WEED ON
I'M GONNA PUT THE SPEED ON, THE KINDA $$$$ O.A.P.'S REPEAT ON,
MY FLOW BE REALLY NICE TO SMOKE YOUR TREES ON
I KNOW THIS SITUATION AIN'T THE BEST FOR MONEY MAKIN', INSTEAD OF PLAYA HATIN',
GET YOUR TICKET AT THE STATION
START $$$$$IN' BOUT THERE'S NOTHIN' TO DO, WRITE A LETTER TO THE COUNCIL FOOL,
WE WANT A BARBECUE
INSTEAD OF SPENDING DOUGH AT THE PUB,
THERE'S A PARTY ON FRIDAY AT THE LOCAL HIP-HOP CLUB,
AND IT GET'S PACKED UP,
THEN WE MIGHT TAKE THIS $$$$ OUTSIDE,
WHILE YOU HATERS GET CRACKED UP,
AS I PLAY THE THUG, FAKE THUGS THEY GET JACKED UP AND CRACKED UP,
DUSTY SKIDZ ASK YOU TO GET YA BACK UP,
GET YA BACK UP GAINST THE WALL,
NOW GET YA BACK UP,
IF NOT, MIGHT AS WELL BE LAYING ON THE GROUND IN HANDCUFFS,
YOU HEARD THE POLICE,
MOTHER$$$$ER GET YOUR HANDS UP,
TALK $$$$, DEPORT YOUR ASS BACK TO BANGKOK

(CHORUS)
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Old 16-01-2006, 11:08 AM   #2
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Check dis out and let me know what u think
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Old 17-01-2006, 05:19 AM   #3
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hey this pretty sik u know,,,,, structure needs tigyin up tho,,, try keepin both bars same length and keep the syllable flow equal in each line so it sounds rhythimic

syllable as in :

"Like pac an pun - $$$$n punches to ur lung"
$$$$n = 2 sylabz pac = 1 sylabz


total syllable count ...............(for line above) ...11
so wen u add the nex bar make sure is close to 11 in syllable count 12/13/10 can b an exception

put mor fillin to the chorus

head up sum of ur areas ...... e.g


(verse - 1)

bla bla blabla bla blabla
bla bla blabla bla blabla
bla bla blabla bla blabla
bla bla blabla bla blabla

(hook)

bla bla blabla bla blabla
bla bla blabla bla blabla
bla bla blabla bla blabla

(chorus)

bla bla blabla bla blabla
bla bla blabla bla blabla
bla bla blabla bla blabla

c wer im gettin at ?........... other than that use the sme comments i gave in the otha feedbacks n ull b ....grillin it
sik piece... keep elevatin
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