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Old 18-10-2007, 07:54 PM   #1
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aint bin on here in time... jus a little freestyle.. feel free 2 hit bak!

Yes Im a realist, Im wrapped with sickness//
Relapse cracked, snap, and flashback to fitness//

Yeah blud im female, Volatile and malicious//
Im the true decision so start decreasing your opinions//

I’ll kill a fiend, bold with steam, fold ya team and I hold the cream//
Im ruthless and vile, Martin Luther King died cause I stole his dream/

Poke ya spleen, not the type to sit back and kick it//
Im sick witted, Im a menace so twisted, these incentives are so demented//

I’ll deep root and cement these rounds in the back of ya mind//
You can get it any day any hour Im so slack with time//

So….who wanna creep, what weaklin wanna beef //
2 many hoes in the streets, scared to shoot like Don Knox with heat//

I’m bomb with hits, everyone got something to lose, but whats to prove//
I’m ill with beats the tools a make you disappear like Proof//

Im here now, I don’t fear clowns, Satan’s beens loosed//
Lost my father to the cross so now I say $$$$ a truce!!//
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Old 23-11-2007, 02:18 PM   #2
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good stuff, like the flow in the first few verses, id hit u back but i havent written for tiiiiiiime so my writin skills are VERY dusty! lol
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Old 24-11-2007, 11:53 PM   #3
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My name is J-boy original english emcee, beat the $$$$ out of you while im sippin that tea//
Lets take it to the dancefloor i wanna embarass you, cant just stay here or my lyrics will flatten you//
u see u started off well buh u ent got the consistency, get the $$$$ away why the hell dyu hit on me//
They say im an artist i spit with such flow, da vincis lyrical shots, i deliver em low//
lets talk bout fitness I got a $$$$in eight-pack, muscles that make u look voluntarily-wack//
yeah, its about time i came around, spittin verses creamin on perpetual sound
aloud, look how im movin the crowd, all of this while im killin you POW!!
I dont care if ur female tha just means theres more of a PRIZE, if you dont wanna come $$$$$ then ill just take you outside//

yeh no hatin.. i liked your verse it kinda gets worse as it goes on tho, starts off well
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Old 28-11-2007, 12:38 AM   #4
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Ay I liked ya first few lines realist, ya need a lil improvement on ya consistency tho
otherwise pretty good standard!! Keep up the good work!!!
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