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Da_Felon Mc

cheak dese lyrics and tell me wot u think:

stick up everybody get facedown
somebody gag their mouths so they carn't make a sound
so da man at dat back hold up ur hand
so we can cut off ur hand so u carn't raise da blind
cus am a sniper and u no i carn't get out
so i dust wit da crew cus i carn't hang about
i said there's the getaway car so i sprint for it, yo
and i drive da car cus am used to it, so
i run out like sercurity gaurd wen he's chasing a dan
he's the one at the back who's da oldest man
it was hectic but not now u no dat av gon
so now its me and da police dat go one on one
it's coming up now opon ur t.v screen
so me and crew just carn't be seen
so dey lock us up and throw away da key
and close da blind so nobody can see
smile cus u dont control dis $$$$
ma dj cum here just to stop dis here
no we on a roll and we have no fear
so we get in da car and get ready to burn