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    Have you had any awful or good experiences that you want to share? Have you wrote a poem or a song about it? If you have or you just want to tell us about it...then put it up here...

    This didnt happen to me personally, but it did to some1 quite close to me, one day it just formed a poem or a song i'll let you decide what you want to call it. So here it is..

    Girl all alone- in a world of madness/
    nobody wanted her happy, so they gave her sadness/
    family all shot dead, couldnt afford a funeral/
    she just then 2 b left in peace, so nobody could ruin them/
    she wants to be dead now, it wud all make sense now/
    if she jumped from the roof and was left down on the ground/
    she finks her problems would be solved, if she was left to sink/
    in her own unhappiness, but thats just a load of $$$$/

    Good gone bad, happy gone sad/
    shes a confused kid without her mom and dad/
    now gone into selling drugs, prostitution then blap!/
    shes shot an innocent person for givin her 'crap'/
    she runs away, away from the scene with semen on her skirt/
    shes turning into dirt, one big flirt/
    sex is her only escape from stoppin her gettin murked/
    she offers herself to guys like theres no tomorow/
    she smiles- but her eyes are full of sorrow/
    dont make clients were condoms, says its un-natural/
    but that aint her reason, shes a slut who lies/
    really she just wanna catch H.I.V and die- why?/
    so she can be with her family again/
    they were her best friends/
    cos really she dun trust any1 who lives down her ends/

    But shes gonna change now/
    I'm gonna make sure of it /
    Support her no doubt till tha very end/
    Tha gyal i was talkin bout, urmm well shes one of best friends...

    So now its your turn, get typing!

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    about time tuffy, keep it up chic

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    lol cheers, had to build up my courage

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    thats quite good u kna, keep it up nuff

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    cheers good for a first timer lol

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    nice work baby!

    wos 4 dinner 2nite den?


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    cheers hubbie

    how does beef stew sound? Its the leftovers from last night...

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    lol well itz ok..........as long as ur stil there

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    lol! i'm not used to anyone being so nice to me!

    i sure am liking it!

    Corse i'll be there...i'm gonna be standing over your shoulder to make sure you eat it all up!

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