Dust to Dust finished..

Dr_Grimsly

at last i finished this, if anyone cud ..leave some feedback
some hot $$$$!!!
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I was the best till all this ended, then i lost my faith
thats why my rhymes are full of greed no need to buy this eaith
but life dont want me living happy, it haunts me like a ghost
I'm stuck in mazes blazin daily cos my troubles reached the coast
I'm like the rubble in the sand, you keep on steppin on me
I'll just turn to dust and bust the trust to keep you sad and lonely
You fony, dont tell me you have 'changed' for best or worst
I still could kill and wipe you clean with skunkys illest verse
I'll be the nightmare in your dreams, i'll fukk up all your themes
And make you think your turning shady turning crazy like my schemes
Rhymes are rolling like a coaster rolling deep and rolling steep
I've reached my highest limit, Now i'm stuck in loops of sleep
Need to wake up from this dream of death and breathe into the air
When i breathe i heave and leave my soul is trapped inside the air
Whats fair, the problems in my mind are left to smear
While my end is near, I'll be the rock to lock your tears
And now its time for me to reach my highest limit in the skys
Stack my axe and hope to cope agaisnt the world and all its lies
I'm surprised that i've got chances to reverse this life and see
All those crimes that i've commited in my time with strife in me
I've got no source of good and evil, I'm just mixed like all of y'all
Fixed with tricks from governments to brainwash kids and make us fall
Make us crawl like animals for food and money, man thats cheap
I feel to kill and make the blood spill from these pigs, put 'em to sleep
Gettin flash backs from my life like im re-living all those days
Only caring for my self not for my friends when smokin haze
Broke n' dazed, cos I'm lost in this maze of life and pain
i can see all of the anger and the blood drippin with stains
Like i'm locked inside this cell but i can tell im in hell
Cos everything is turning and i'm burning while i dwell
On my deeper darker past that grows in me and makes me weak
Wich is why this rhyme is changing every second that i speak
Every second my technique would leak without having the power
To keep my words in shape before i $$$$ my mind each hour
Forcing lyrics to emerge like a serge of evil-spirits
All the kids around the world'll know my name when people-hear-it
I always seem to fall and get back up cos i'm determined
To Find some peace in life and hope the gates of heaven opened
But i'm filled with pain and memorys of the anger in my soul
I guess my destiny's to be alone, my life just lost control
I'm falling deep into a pit of death and dying was my goal
Cos i was hurt inside and crying tears of blood drippin in bowls

Dr_Grimsly

Noone got nothin to say then?