Download Link Mp3...dream I Escape

W10

This is a tune I made around a year ago.. Deep and thought. Hope you have some feedback for man...

Hit the feedback on the thread let me know what you all think


Safe

W10


http://www.megaupload.com/?d=DORBAU3B

MUSKK_2008

At first you sound american. Its good though, like really good, but how comes it just stops, it doesn't sound like it finishes? Btw how old are you??

W10

Doesn't stop on the MP3 that I have on my computer but then uploaded through that system MEGAUPLOAD not sure if it would have uploaded the whole tune? The last bar should have been
'Im crusin in Neutral coastin aside where destiny ends Ill slowly arrive'

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Safe for the feedback though man, I'm 25 now.

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MUSKK_2008

Kk, i finishes like, ' Like i don't know...' Or something but it sound like it stops in the middle of a word.

Its kool, you got bare talent, I'm 13 lol.

*Note: It says on my profile that im 15 cuz i thought i had to be a certain age.

W10

I got a llil brother whos 13 man and hes just starting to spit now!
As you get older your flow and bars develop as you develop, you get me... I started about 2 1/2 years ago now and I notice how much I have changed in style through that time. I prefer to ride on the different kinda classical themes like you heard in my track but then every bar is heard so every bar has to be tight.
Battling is a past time, I enjoy it, makes me laugh still!
At 13 you have got some bars though! I know peeps my age that are swag!!
But do you know what 'CONFORMITY' means?

When I spit I try and tell a story that I perceive in my world. I went jail for 7 years and done certain things and that, but I try not to GLORIFY it in every bar. Most spitters, rappers etc enjoy flowing on the same topic of shooting guns and stabbing people left right and centre, but then they peform to the English Rap cliche, we all sound the same. Weak bars, bare attitude. The best in the world have both a heavy attitude and intelligent bars- Nas, 2PAC, etc!

Tell your story init, thats all advice I would give. Nobody likes to live the life I live, or have lived, so every time they say I shoot this or pull that they lying. If you are gonna say that then mean it, get me. If I say I can do this, then I could, but the more you say it the more you make yourself believe you are doing that init cuz!

Jail, straps, blah blah blah... whatever man.... if it needs to get done, it gets done... other than that stay humble dawg! Lol

Life is how you make it... we gotta sort this English spittin out cos compared to the Americans we swag!!!

MUSKK_2008

Yeye i get ya. But nah i dunno what conformity means..

Most of the time i do try n spit how i feel, i ain't down with all tha guns, knifes n sh*t like that, thats just dumb. Most of the time i just tell my story bout life growing up with a alcoholic (my dad was), an' stuff like that.

As for the Americans and their music I'd say that their better at most music then tha brits, but i reckon the grime scene is kinda owned by brits.

I no your like 25 an' that but you got msn?? I'd like to get to know you init, you seem like someone i need in my life, someone to turn to that i don't know, cuz if i don't know you i feel i can tell you stuff easier init.

Also what was that instrumental in your track, at first it sounded like the piano version of some song called numb, but then i listened to it properly an' can't tell what it is?..

Anyway if your down for tha msn thing then PM me your addy or I'll set you mine, either way.

Bles -1-