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Old 26-01-2006, 10:48 PM   #1
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Just sitting here staring,all im doing sighing and thinking
cant come to a conclusion so i end up once again drinking
wat about my debts,wat about this and wat about that
just wish i could come in to some money, pay off my overdraft
everybody knows that money it doesnt come for free
it dont grow on trees,you gotta make a living and work way past the age of 60
see im living with this depression,taking subscribed pills
walk in to the pharmacy,and they say "junkie lookin for cheap thrills"
but this aint the deal , i just need these cos i just feel
way out of reach of my life, i feel like i'll just explode and then easily kill
living at home,no money,no job just feeling like a bum
no girl, no life,whilst all my mates are having fun
so i find out thru connections on where to buy a gun
hold it to my head, thinking is this $$$$ about done?
looking down the barrel do u really think i'll kid ya?
gently place it to my head,do you think i should pull the trigger?


blahhhh just summin i made up in 15 minutes
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Old 26-01-2006, 10:50 PM   #2
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some nice lines there man


see im living with this depression,taking subscribed pills
walk in to the pharmacy,and they say "junkie lookin for cheap thrills"

on a serious note
http://www.alcoholics-anonymous.org/?Media=PlayFlash
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Old 26-01-2006, 10:52 PM   #3
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thanx bro.....i ahvent written anything for time......just wen im at home and bored i think i might start writing again
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Old 26-01-2006, 10:53 PM   #4
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thats what iwas on a bout earlier..we need people to write out of interest...thats why before i couldmt be bothered to battle anyone cus it was all the same
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Old 26-01-2006, 10:55 PM   #5
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yea im feeling ya dawg.......i'll be hitting more of these up asap
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Old 26-01-2006, 10:57 PM   #6
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aiite i'll be on lata..gonna watch lil tv 1st

readem em in a bit


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Old 27-01-2006, 03:59 AM   #7
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$$$$ man thats deep
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Old 27-01-2006, 04:24 AM   #8
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yer deepp, loved it....
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Old 27-01-2006, 06:14 PM   #9
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thanx for the feedback guys
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Old 06-02-2006, 05:11 PM   #10
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All These Wah Gwans
Garms
Wanna Gal On Each 1 Of My Arms
Hopin My Manz Them Cum To No Harm
All I Wants Sum Green Inside My Pedee Palm
Dont Like No Guy Comin In With Firearms
Wen It Comes To Gals Im Like A Bowl Of Nestles Lucky Charms
Sweet
Move Ur Feet To The Beat
U Cud Never Compete Cus Ur Tecnique Is Weak
I Leave U Like A Homeless On The Street
Cus U Cud Never Defeat
Ill Murk U Like Ur A Soft Sweet
Fook Wiv Me Rap U On Ur Beak
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Old 06-02-2006, 06:01 PM   #11
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mate

u cant just spit anywhere..
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Old 06-02-2006, 10:32 PM   #12
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Originally Posted By: Sy-Clops

thanx for the feedback guys


hey, sh*t i'm feelin you big style, i gave up on writing and this is the first thing i've written in a while, cuz i lost interest but when there's somethin deep goin on the words juss spill -


What has life come to, smoking joints out the window/
i'm so effortlessly numb that i don't even feel the wind blow//
feel like i've got no heart like tin man in the wizard of oz/
stoned, alone an cryin remembrin everythin that was//
but it's too late for that and if i knew what i know now/
maybe i could cope because back then i would know how//
but i'm doped now and i release my emotions/
all my lakes of tears are building up into oceans//
I can't cope and, i'm sick and tired of being strong/
can't stand bein in these places where i feel i don't belong/
Trapped inside a f*c*ed up cage where promises are made then broken/
think that you can trust your bre's so ya heart starts to open//
and ya let them in you share your thoughts and all your feelings/
not knowing, that not one line was said with any meaning//
so i struggle through-dealing-with these new found demons/
but paranoia gets the best of me so on this page i'm concealing//
hide behind my facade put on my public persona/
all these people surround me but still i feel like a loner//
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Old 06-02-2006, 10:41 PM   #13
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SY CLOPS N I-RONIK

THT WAS GUD/DEEP DROPS,,,, U TOO SHUD MAY B GET SUM COLLAB GOIN ON, WUD B INTERESTIN

overall .....for both nyc imagery/structure/multi's/consistency/topik choice

add in some mor multis's n ironik- may b add one or too rhetorical questions jus to appeal mor to the readers n make the lyric mor eye catchin n entertainin

overall both gud pieces no doubt... uppin this
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