Darric Vs G-unit Soldier

mr grant

YOU KNOW THE RULES

d12player

we did dey batel

piro

BUMP HEADS

Darric

Im Not Positive On The Amount Of Complexity You Kids Are Used To Seeing... But This Is How I Always Write... And I Dont Like Leaving Explanations On Anything Besides Personals... So... Figure It Out For Yourselves

...I Got Anger To Spare, So Im VENTING A TON AT YOU.. I Think This Dude Will Be PLENTY OF FUN TO SHOOT, When I Lay Soldier To Rest.. With A TWENTY ONE GUN SALUTE... Bye
...What Do You Hope To Gain IN PLOTTING AGAINST ME? I'll Leave You In A Pile Of SKIN, ROTTING AS MINCE MEAT..And Who Says I'm Not Smashing G-Unit? When Im "Breakin Banks By WITHDRAWING A 50"...
...I Got KIDS AWING WITH ENVY, Why Face Someone Whos DREADED MOST WITH HIS DROPS?...Soldiers Usually Travel In Units, But I'll Make Sure This One Travels Alone, ..HEADED HOME IN A BOX....
...Your DEATH IS AN OMEN THAT STOPS Any Hopes You Had Of Winning, Cuz Face It.. You FACE NOW.. A REAL GOD, And It Would Be Stupid To Think I Cant Defeat This Fake G-Unit.. When I Could Just As Easily TAKE OUT THE REAL SQUAD...

You Kids Know Nothing Of UE.. But Ill Tag That $$$$ Anyways...

Un-Adulterated Evil Mother $$$$ers

I Hope I Wrote Long Enough Lines...

Good Luck G'

Darric

Blah... always shrinking my writing.. damn forum boxes!.. o well i still think it meets the min... 4 bars should be enough.. and if not.. o well i dont deserve to win

IdE-iLL

aight...
Ur rhymes have left ur throat dry... 'tonic or spirits?'//
And the rhymes I 'spit' are so 'sick' that i 'vomit my lyrics'//
Ive already spat two 'BARS' like a 'MARS DELIGHT'//
Get ready for 'dismissal' on 'wednesday night'//
Im only a youngun, but i spit lyk i am nine-teen//
The way i 'dig up' lyrics, you could say i was in the 'rhyme team'//(time team)
When you say you 'monkey around' with ur girl u mean her tits and armpits are hairy//
U dont understand my wordplay, then look it up in a dictionary//
And ur mum is a 'right $$$$$' with a 'tight clit' like a 'white chick'//
Goin gainst me is painful like wen u 'bite tits' with nipples sharper than 'nike ticks'//

DaRk_Ch0c0!at£

nice drops hhmmmmm gotta give it to G soldier.

RaMpag3

SOLDIER WON STR8 UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nipples sharper dan nick tickz lmao omg dat bar iz sick

DaRk_Ch0c0!at£

lol gemme.

IdE-iLL

cheers for the feedback. safe

I-RoNiK

am gonna hav 2 go wit gunit soldier... i fink dats some excellent lyrics boi!! its more simple... a fink if its too complicated its just nonsense the simple stuff sounds so much better

IdE-iLL

remember 2 vote on the poll aswell

I-RoNiK

oh yeah fanx for remindin me!

SanSeraph

lol Darric obviously breezed this one.

"...I Got Anger To Spare, So Im VENTING A TON AT YOU.. I Think This Dude Will Be PLENTY OF FUN TO SHOOT, When I Lay Soldier To Rest.. With A TWENTY ONE GUN SALUTE..."

"...I Got KIDS AWING WITH ENVY, Why Face Someone Whos DREADED MOST WITH HIS DROPS?...Soldiers Usually Travel In Units, But I'll Make Sure This One Travels Alone, ..HEADED HOME IN A BOX...."
^^^These were the 2 stand out bars from Darric, and in terms of comlexity, eclipsed everything G-Unit brought.

"And the rhymes I 'spit' are so 'sick' that i 'vomit my lyrics'//"
^^^I guess that was the best G-Unit had(?)

So now it's time for me to break my vote down further.

Multies: Darric - A lot of you'll no-doubt be confused by this. Multies are "multiple rhymes", displaying your ability to rhyme more than one syllable. For example, Darric had:

DREADED MOST WITH HIS DROPS - 7 syllables
HEADED HOME IN A BOX - 7 syllables

G-Unit had, at best:

tonic or spirits - 5 syllables
vomit my lyrics - 5 syllables

Flow: G-Unit - His bars were obviously based on an audio style with shorter length, making his verse easier to say out loud than Darric's

Punchlines: Darric - I've already highlighted the 2 lines from Darric that stood out. G-Unit's punches were very basic, like:

"i spit lyk i am nine-teen"
"u mean her tits and armpits are hairy"
^^^Both of these lacked any real effort

Wordplay: Darric -

"Im "Breakin Banks By WITHDRAWING A 50"..."
^^^This was a play on 2 of G-Unti's members and made sense, therefore good

vs.

"you could say i was in the 'rhyme team'//(time team)"
^^^Sorry G, but this was forced beyond belief... there wasn't even any relationship between the words you were using, other than 'rhyme' rhyming with 'time' - didn't make any sense

Complexity - Darric - It's pretty clear from just looking at the verses that Darric has far more experience battling and incorporating creative ideas into complicated rhyme schemes. G-Unit's verse was basic in comparison.

Personals: Neither - They knew nothing about eachother.

Overall, Even though Darric didn't put much effort in, his verse simply outshined the inexperienced G-Unit. G, your verse wasn't terrible by any means, but there wasn't really anything I could quote from it as dope. No Hate. Peace

Vote = Darric

SanSeraph

lmao@the score I jus saw... I'm not going to say any more...

I-RoNiK

a fink dis line is pretty dope...

And ur mum is a 'right $$$$$' with a 'tight clit' like a 'white chick'//
Goin gainst me is painful like wen u 'bite tits' with nipples sharper than 'nike ticks'//



yeah I get multis... but when dey dun make sense 2 me ders no point is der!

SanSeraph

lol What didn't make sense?? Personally, when punchlines don't make sense, I find that's the problem

mr grant

seraph has the only REAL vote in this

1-0 darric

Darric

So how is it that im winning 1-0 while Larkin was rode out of the tournament... this whole $$$$ is $$$$ed...

if kids want to vote against me then fine... let them.. maybe they do know so little about hip hop that they dont know any better..