CA1 v kd0t

[CA1]

-4 Bars/8 Lines
-Challenger spits first
-Reply within 24hrs
-1 Drop Each

Be good if anyone active/browsing could vote up.

Good luck.

[kd0t]

Cool, thought you would have laid a verse for me?

I'll try get time today but have some work to do for tomorrow :/

[kd0t]

Wont be tonight, I have to finish a website for tomorrow. Try and get at you after that.

[kd0t]

CA1 sorry but can you check in, I'm not posting if you arent going to be about, should be able to drop tonight.

[CA1]

Am here bro. Drop when you can and i'll reply.

[kd0t]

Thanks.

intrinsic to my artillery is this linguistic ability/
thoughts of killing me's, like puberty, it give birth to my virility//
i.e. come f"ck with me, I got hard bars for this c"nt/
delivered from a mic palmed sidearm so watch when I bust//

~CA1 I'm blind to your achievements, my vision, just See A Loss/
you're pen should be in the bin, it's an easy decision, because//
in a vicious war of knowledge your mind's obscured by the fog/
that'll leave you lost, in the midst, of this writers block//

[CA1]

Exercise my executioner ability, guillotine your neck, the mic cord similar to cheese wire
Watch how the vocab elevates n twists this lames mind frame like cush, only my words get you higher

Every bar you spittin seem like you 'gassing yourself up', like an 'unattended fuel pump'
Get your whole body shot up without emptying a clip, cause I call the magazine 'unleaded' when I dump

Accurate shots hit like a 'K' with a 'dot', the bullets hot, but ya'll already know this dudes not
Like an 'Xbox', 'Three Sixty' his head, 'Exorcism' needed, C-A takes over your body n lets your soul rot

Get struck like a kid acting up, you still acting tough, I click clack, clap you up
No pre-written compositions that take 5 days to recite, I stay spittin' off the cuff; One!

[CA1]

Sorry I ended up writing more. Your more than welcome to drop another 4 bars if you want bruh

[kd0t]

or you could have just followed your own rules... not even gonna say anymore let the voting happen

[CA1]

Well actually, I don't even know why i've said that because I ain't over wrote :/

[kd0t]

then you are an idiot, just because you lay it out in 4 sections doesnt make it 4 lines. Look how long the lines are, look how many syllables are contained within, unless you rap like busta rhymes and twista's love child you wrote a 16. Settled easily, what song can you rap this over?

Or f-it if you are so confident thats an 8 we can put the audio up, you can even pick the tune as long as i get a veto option.

[CA1]

Who said anything about 4 lines? I said 4 BARS. So that all depends on what you consider a bar. A bar to me is as i've done, 2 lines. So 2 lines per bar = 8 lines. But maybe thats just my interpretation of it?

And as far as putting it to a beat...Whats that got to do with a TEXT battle? Come on son.

[kd0t]

typo i meant bars.

The term bars is not open to interpretation and like i said just because you lay it out in a certain way does not change how long the lines are. I could have done what you done and laid mine out like this:

intrinsic to my artillery is this linguistic ability thoughts of killing me's, like puberty, it give birth to my virility//
i.e. come f"ck with me, I got hard bars for this c"nt delivered from a mic palmed sidearm so watch when I bust//

~CA1 I'm blind to your achievements, my vision, just See A Loss you're pen should be in the bin, it's an easy decision, because//
in a vicious war of knowledge your mind's obscured by the fog that'll leave you lost, in the midst, of this writers block//

Oh wow look how similar it looks now... Does it change how long my verse was? Does it change how many bars there are? Bars is a musical term maybe you should go back to basics and learn to count beats then work your way back up to bars....

So what it is a text battle, if you cant rhyme it over a beat than you are doing it wrong, you may as well go write a poem that way you can decide the rules each time.

[CA1]

If your lack of diversity in spitting hinders you n you can't make it flow then thats your problem. You ain't even gotta spit it quick to pick up the flow. When I wrote that, it was written to a slower pace.

Why you getting all pent up anyway? Getting real emtional n $$$$.

[kd0t]

diversity? lol do a search..

anyway, i never said i couldnt make it flow, i said it doesnt fit in 8 lines. It doesnt, if it does put the audio up? You fail because you cant even stick to your own rules, you switch them up prob because you couldnt fit your thoughts into 8 lines so instead come out with some BS that it is only 8 when you blatently wrote couplets on each line.

It's poor.

[BornNBredPothed]

k didnt know it was only 1 round woulda already voted

1 sec gota review
#k vote = ca1

both wer standard tho

[kd0t]

can you give any feedback at all?

[Bane]

Vote: kdot

CA1, imo it looks like you're trying too hard to make your bars have depth. Don't get me wrong, you had some decent bars and some potentially good ones but you're stretching too much to make a connection.

[magikgbh]

Have to agree a bit with K.Dot about the structure.
And bane is 100% right. You need to link everything up with fewer words.
Maybe thats summin you'll gain from experience.

The content was okay on both sides but ...
Due to what I have said my vote must go in favour of = K.Dot