who wants it
Content:
Wordplay:
Originality:
Punchlines:
Multies:
Aggression:
Flow:
Rhyming:
Personals:
Humour:
Killer Bars:
Battle overview: strong/weak points:
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This is a discussion on Battle 20 lines within the Open Mic forums, part of the The Studio category; who wants it Content: Wordplay: Originality: Punchlines: Multies: Aggression: Flow: Rhyming: Personals: Humour: Killer Bars: Battle overview: strong/weak points: VOTE: ...
who wants it
Content:
Wordplay:
Originality:
Punchlines:
Multies:
Aggression:
Flow:
Rhyming:
Personals:
Humour:
Killer Bars:
Battle overview: strong/weak points:
VOTE:
VOTES MUST BE USED ON THIS
ite im well up for that!
in that case willpost this mornin, coz am goin out later, and work all day 2moro!! workin on it now... i dun no much bout ya so bars will prob be a bit basic... but we'll see!
S.T - replacing R wid a D-
ya bars are more simple den ma ABC's-
'f*cked' so many 'wh*res' an now ya left wit 'disease'-
shoulda 'screwed' on ya head an used ya expertise-
as if that weren't enough ya even tried ya hand wit 'gays'-
they left u stunned an amazed- for days- until you caught the 'ace of spades'-
disgraced- now, i'm runnin bullets round ya brain-
i'm like 'the scabby queen' i'll leave a mark in ya veins-
drained - i'll leave ya 'locked up' in 'chains'
as I continue to reign- ma glory will remain.
You’re Fairly Disposable, can’t see how you’re viewed as a vet
Getting unusually upset coz if I win... You'll lose your respect?
Ya style up-n-down like 6 o'clock you can’t hurt me...
Time-wise ya punches won’t reach my level hands down like six thirty
He could bold his verse n still couldn’t find reactions
Plus she's known more of grabbing crotches then mike Jackson
She’s like birds in your gardens just a pair of t*ts
I-ronik how the b*tch is filthy but dishes out weak-f*cking-fairy-hits
Ironik I’ll scorch u like I’m frying ya brain...
leave u Scarred, torched, Dying (STD).leaving this p*ussy burned like vaginas inflamed
shud be a close battle ! some nice drops by both of ya
Content: str
Wordplay: str
Originality: str
Punchlines: str
Multies: ironik I guess
Aggression: neither.
Flow: equal
Rhyming: ironik
Personals: ironik
Humour: str
Killer Bars: str
Battle overview: str battle was better a lot more punches..more diverse…ironik didn’t push it…
Vote str
shotta vote...man..we need to get this site goin properly...no one votes hereOriginally Posted by TOP_SHOTTA
i'l vote but are they finished or they still goin a few rounds ? rico u dnt spit much, u got decent rymez n sh1t
yea its a single pop.....im busy guy....i might spit tonight..afta my seminar....
to be fair i aint da best voter :-) still learnin sh1t man, but frm what i see str took it better content, originalty, an punchlines, i-ronik had a few multys in there, but i think cos she didnt kno wot to expect frm him she took it abit lightly,both had good flows an rhymez, i rekon they shud hav a few rounds tho, both got skillz !! did i make sense ? :-)
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