Battle 20 lines

**STR** · 30-09-2005, 07:57 AM

who wants it

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Killer Bars:

Battle overview: strong/weak points:

VOTE:

VOTES MUST BE USED ON THIS

**I-RoNiK** · 30-09-2005, 09:27 AM

ite im well up for that!

**STR** · 30-09-2005, 09:34 AM

Aite deadline 2moz 12 in the afternoon uk time

**I-RoNiK** · 30-09-2005, 09:36 AM

in that case willpost this mornin, coz am goin out later, and work all day 2moro!! workin on it now... i dun no much bout ya so bars will prob be a bit basic... but we'll see!

**I-RoNiK** · 30-09-2005, 10:15 AM

S.T - replacing R wid a D-
ya bars are more simple den ma ABC's-
'f*cked' so many 'wh*res' an now ya left wit 'disease'-
shoulda 'screwed' on ya head an used ya expertise-
as if that weren't enough ya even tried ya hand wit 'gays'-
they left u stunned an amazed- for days- until you caught the 'ace of spades'-
disgraced- now, i'm runnin bullets round ya brain-
i'm like 'the scabby queen' i'll leave a mark in ya veins-
drained - i'll leave ya 'locked up' in 'chains'
as I continue to reign- ma glory will remain.

**STR** · 30-09-2005, 10:17 AM

You’re Fairly Disposable, can’t see how you’re viewed as a vet
Getting unusually upset coz if I win... You'll lose your respect?
Ya style up-n-down like 6 o'clock you can’t hurt me...
Time-wise ya punches won’t reach my level hands down like six thirty
He could bold his verse n still couldn’t find reactions
Plus she's known more of grabbing crotches then mike Jackson
She’s like birds in your gardens just a pair of t*ts
I-ronik how the b*tch is filthy but dishes out weak-f*cking-fairy-hits
Ironik I’ll scorch u like I’m frying ya brain...
leave u Scarred, torched, Dying (STD).leaving this p*ussy burned like vaginas inflamed

**TOP_SHOTTA** · 30-09-2005, 11:34 AM

shud be a close battle ! some nice drops by both of ya

**odp** · 30-09-2005, 12:59 PM

Content: str
Wordplay: str
Originality: str
Punchlines: str
Multies: ironik I guess
Aggression: neither.
Flow: equal
Rhyming: ironik
Personals: ironik
Humour: str
Killer Bars: str

Battle overview: str battle was better a lot more punches..more diverse…ironik didn’t push it…

Vote str

**odp** · 30-09-2005, 01:01 PM

Originally Posted by TOP_SHOTTA

shud be a close battle ! some nice drops by both of ya

shotta vote...man..we need to get this site goin properly...no one votes here

**TOP_SHOTTA** · 30-09-2005, 01:10 PM

i'l vote but are they finished or they still goin a few rounds ? rico u dnt spit much, u got decent rymez n sh1t

**odp** · 30-09-2005, 01:12 PM

yea its a single pop.....im busy guy....i might spit tonight..afta my seminar....

**TOP_SHOTTA** · 30-09-2005, 01:33 PM

to be fair i aint da best voter :-) still learnin sh1t man, but frm what i see str took it better content, originalty, an punchlines, i-ronik had a few multys in there, but i think cos she didnt kno wot to expect frm him she took it abit lightly,both had good flows an rhymez, i rekon they shud hav a few rounds tho, both got skillz !! did i make sense ? :-)