bars :)

[littlebec]

yeah i'm here in my home town
got my feet held firmly on the ground
i'm bringin the heat i'm bringin the sound
i'm bringin the beat can you hear it now
rip off the roof an tear it down
likkle b likkle b e to the c
little white kid female mc
step 1 step 2 step cant step me
fresh to death lyrical laydeeeee
straight to the 4 movin on the floor
you stop it
i drop it
drop it
hardcore



feedback please .. first try

[D_DoT_P]

cuz it looks like , you know how to spitt
but im new to he game andd my bar's are S**T
im looking for a name , so replyy too mee
because i wana make it big andd be a topp MC .


basicly look'inn for a MC nameee
someing likeee Kronik Kiid or .... give us a shout



thanks , Dylann x

[littlebec]

cuz it looks like , you know how to spitt
but im new to he game andd my bar's are S**T
im looking for a name , so replyy too mee
because i wana make it big andd be a topp MC .


basicly look'inn for a MC nameee
someing likeee Kronik Kiid or .... give us a shout



thanks , Dylann x

i just use my nickname dat everyonne gave me feels natural yanoo what i mean ? i wouldnt push for a name you'll get one wen the time is right thats all i can say lol :P

[D_DoT_P]

i just use my nickname dat everyonne gave me feels natural yanoo what i mean ? i wouldnt push for a name you'll get one wen the time is right thats all i can say lol :P

yeahh i get yaaa ,, but myy nicknamee is ' Dill ' sooo need somethingg baddasss lols x

[littlebec]

yeahh i get yaaa ,, but myy nicknamee is ' Dill ' sooo need somethingg baddasss lols x

haaha okkaaay ..

[burglarboiii]

just a few bats from me
Yo You will get jacked up, Slapped up, Put in the boot, b1tch slap with the strap, Give me your loot

i write the rest for the mc
go on youtube and seach burglarbuy

[Tha_KroniC]

its allgood aslong u aint tha kronic haha,.....bars sounds like a good title to do sumthin, ..freestyle bars , ill make em up as i go

u can call me Tha KroniC cause im a chronic lyricist
or u can call me Tha Kronic because im hittin that sh!t
also known as Tha Stona, kronic smoke blower
dope chokin hopin tha rum and coke wont have me throwin
up stomac acids that taste like sh!t since i aint ate
fu*k it back to booze but first i hav to urinate
just swayin side to side to tha beat in tha background
its kinda familiar, hang on that track sounds....
like california love by Dr Dre and Tupac
so i rap that $$$$ by tha speaker cause ima rappa who loves
tha music, tha hiphop, so i stop and spit from tha top
then people listenin in and sum1 starts to beat box
i dont no where i am and im drunk as fu*k
i dont think that i can rap, i think im fu*ked
so put a beer in my hand and give me anotha cone
then ill walk out here stumblin tryna find my way home

well there u go, i guess it kinda turned into like a story, i like storys tho so enjoy lol, its all fun
WEST WEST

[Ill_Skillz]

Dude Aslong As You Aint Lyrical Genocide,Ill Skillz,Konfess Or Hectic I Aint Fussed Haha

If Your Bars Were Killer I Would Suggest Homocide Or Something But Practice With Multi's And Vocab Then Drop Il Give You A Name