Back At it

09-07-2006, 12:38 PM	#1
LJT Registered User Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 84	Back At it Just a warm up anyone can reply... I took a time out so i could take a deep breath I took so long they all done thought that i left Im back at it, like a fiend back on crack You know i speak the truth thats why am lacin' this track Never in the lime light i just sit at the back I know you's a faker so am preparin' the attack Speak on that money and how you got stacks in the bank I seen your bank balance man that statement was blank Eventually, ama get back at it n come down heavy like rubble When that happens run cause am bringin' trouble Double barrel, bust your bubble now thats humble I got caught up in the moment and lost my mind Now am back at it am back on the grind F*ck the haters your time is comin' soon No matter the weather or if its full moon Im back at it n here to stay so make room

10-07-2006, 08:02 PM	#2
lady_lyrical_00 ~~ WORDZ of WISDOM ~~ Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 286	this was coo for ur first drop ('im gessin itz ur first...correct me if im wrong) u gt sum gud rhtymic lines , soundz like u writ to a beat....? sum syllabic rhymin n sum metz .... sum gud imagery but cud b dun a lil deeper my advice.... up ur volcab sum mor even doe the genre dont relli repquire it dat much..jus a lil tweak up will do.... add sum mor linez iz a lil short..but considerin itz ur warm up das coo... mainly add mor metz,imagery,syllabic rhymin,personaz n so forth tht shud heat ur $$$$ up... b mor creativ as well as maintain ur flow n creativity at the same tym.. hmm.. u gt n e deep stff? ..if so post sum up ill feed to dat...sfe on the whole no doubt this gt sum potential...stay tru...gd stff

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