*Awakening Creature*

Ex_Calibur

i had this on another site so yall can crit this as well lol

The Door Closes So Slowly, Viewing Behind It All The Places Desolate
The Shadows Are Tessellate, Engraving Messages Depicting Pegasus
Lives Immaculate, Permit The Remains Of Time Through One Abacus
Energy Would Omit The Matters That Plead In Means Of The Advocate
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Not Having It, The Clocks Tick To An Approaching Limit To Which I Burst,
I'm A Maverick, I Stick To My Own Plans And Quench The Things I Thirst.
From The Day's First, I Stick To A Linen Chrysalis I'm Easily Encased In,
To Pass The Speeding Seconds As Me And Time Are Historically Racing.
The Hall I'm Facing, Is A Labyrinth Of Secrets Leading Into Many Rooms,
Secluded In Gloom, I Ponder Why I Must Awaken On This Day So Soon.
The Sun Raised To Engulf The Moon In A Light That Burns My Lazy Eyes,
And I Actually Seemed Like A Well-Dressed Person In This Crazy Disguise.
And Maybe Girls and Guys, You'll One Day Face This Very Same Problem,
To Balance Coffee In One Hand, Tie In The Other, With Skin Like A Goblin.
I'm Meager, With Misplaced Shoes, And Other Tall-Tale Tired Features.
I'd Bag Groceries With My Eyes, On Another Day Of An Awakening Creature

HypNa

again nice lines bro

Dr_Grimsly

thats sick, now who agree's with me? thats sick!. thats sick

you know, this guy and tazer battling wud be pretty interesting to see...

The Fool

Reminds me of Exzes! That was tight, heavy!

Exzes

“	Originally Posted By: The Fool Reminds me of Exzes! That was tight, heavy!	”

Should I be proud of that? :S

But yeah, nice lines Ex, it is a bit reminiscent of my old stuff. Nice lines, keep it up.

j-kid1

“	Originally Posted By: Dr_Grimsly you know, this guy and tazer battling wud be pretty interesting to see...	”

na i dnt fink so