A Taster

Asian Princess

um...this aint a freestlye or none of that, just a pre-written sumthin to wet yah appetite a lil bit...comments are appreciated. oh and if you see the name 'Venom' pop-up thats coz i went by the name 'Lady Venom' on previous websites

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I flow-smooth to explode-roofs, Venom doesnt slow-or-cruise, fully mobilised in a mode-to-shoot
Wallow-and-hide feeble foes battle-and-die so like 'cannabilistic lions' imma make you 'swallow your pride'/
Sores-and-bruises matched with scores-of-mucus, rip-your-cords in two-fifths to leave yah jawline-toothless/
Im out 4 tha chedder, lookin 4 a 'brush wit death?' then i guess im yah 'hairdresser'/
I'll have yah nose-fractured chest-blasted and smashed-in-fractions/
Call me librarian the way i read-the-street, never-concede-defeat so proceed-to-beef cause im breedin-in-heat, have y'all bleedin-in-greef/
Slam-you-like-Van-Damn bite you wit-fangs, that'll mangle-yah-hands grapple-yah-mans stamina-that'll-damage-yah-man RIP i branded you...DAMN!
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hmmmm...not my best, but not my worst either

Key:
im used to the hip-hop forum setup, so this is how you do it there

'word' = metaphor/punchline
-word- = multisyllable rhyme

The multisyllable rhymes are pretty self-explanatory, but if you need any of the punchlines to be explained i'll be happy to oblige.


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SUPERSTAR SINISTA

yeh thats nice still..check your pms.

J.K.

“	Originally posted by Asian Princess i'll be happy to oblige.	”

Oh yeah? :P

Some nice wordplay there

Mi$LeD_YoUtH!

“	Wallow-and-hide feeble foes battle-and-die so like 'cannabilistic lions' imma make you 'swallow your pride'/	”

nice line.........

Lyrical_Shotter

heavi lyrics princess

lady phoenix

sick! big up female mc

Lady::Zesta

bashy bashy, watch out male haterz