My music (acoustic/alternative)

redhouse

I could'nt get through Helium. Ballad of Folly I enjoyed good lyrics and melody but nothing different. Then Sleep deprived seemed a little different but then got annoying because the vocals were so hard to hear. I know you were trying to do something with the vocals on purpose and I liked it at first but maybe it was a little too much, despite that I liked the melody.Braindead was about the same as Helium but caught me there in the middle with your outburst of vocals and it pulled me back in til the end. I really liked the Same Again and Beyond The Sky. All in all your lyrics are good but you gotta keep me more entertained with the music. I was trying to be honest, but you haven't listened to any songs I've ever written and I know putting yourself out there is hard and you wouldn't have done it unless you want honest opinions in order to get better. Way to make something yourself... I like where your mind is at with the lyrics