who likes this one???

DJ SOLO

here - do me a favour and say what u think of these two

www.gcerroni.fsnet.co.uk/deathmarch-f.rm

www.gcerroni.fsnet.co.uk/deathmarch-h.rm

which u prefer???

let me know

solo

Sen

so far, neither...mostly because the sounds sound thin and cheap...

I do really like the drum patterns and think that with the right sounds/tweaking, this could be good (either form)

I like the dissonanace you've created between the lead and bass

This is in the Narrows realm of things

Add an element to humanize it, and it'll sound better...also, your drum rolls sound short by 2 bars or something...they just stop unexpectedly to my ears...