what do you think about this

dan agent

hi

i did a new tune, what do you think. please give me some feedback...

check it out on:

http://www.master-records.ch/sounds...eclubnewmix.ram

thanx
d a n

switzerland
www.master-records.ch

dan agent

such a bad tune?

DJ FRAMPSTER

not a bad tune m8
I say u should take vocals

Sen

I'm assuming the vocalist isnt' English speaking as his first language

Nice tune tho! like the off key blips.

Could use a pad sound to kinda hold it all together.

I'm a sucker for vocal edits, so I like the minor ones you've done! More!

I like the offbeat blank spots you leave in the beats...gives it nice pressure.

SoundBoy

The songs alright, a bit too happy for me, its a good song actually, just not the type of garage I personally listen to, the singer can sing, but there is one little bit that annoys me and its as soon as the singer sings the first line of the chorus the song is alright though

You've got some nice sounds in there though, Lyrics for chorus are POOR

Overall, cut a long story short, I like the beat/hate the vocals

dan agent

hejo

you're right with the vocals.
but it's always hard, for swiss or german producers, to do vocals that convince people with mothertongue english

but i will work it out
one day i hope....

so what do you think, is this tune to bad for beeing released in uk or usa? (does everybody say, oh, this singer is from russia )

thanx for the response so far


thanx dan

Sen

I would say, make a dub mix - just vocal edits, rather than the whole vocal line...