Tune update

DJ-Stylus

Re-worked the bline, sorted the levels and just generaly done more to the tune -

All comments welcomed

http://www.skoolhouse.com/realaudio/dibreakz.ram

DJ-Stylus

Comment on ma tune $$$$$$es!!!!

Sen

like the string/pad washes

This would sound nice with a vocalist

very very nice reworking of the bline - much more interesting now...watch the cutoffs - at times, it gets too rezzy for the speakers - may be a little grating on the ears. but wikked feel to the bline...nice and fast, varied, with good pressure to contrast the pads.

The little blips around 1:50 are flat. the percussion after the 2 minute mark would sound better in tune as well - it's flat as well...

Great effort so far! - oooh, nice key change of the bline...that's something you don't hear often...works well. Some nice subtle filter effects on the bline.

Songs needs one more element - other than just bline and drums. An MC, Vocalist, etc. would kill it.

Nice work!

bionicbooty

First off, I'm not crazy about the b-line. The sound is cool, but the notes don't hit me. So it's hard to fully dig into the track without feeling the main bassline. But I'm with sen and like the key change - and I'm a bigger fan of the bassline AFTER the change.

The main drum beat is right where it should be, and that's a HUGE plus.

The washes are nice texture, but I'm not a big fan of the whistle type sound around 1:30.

So, overall, I liked the second half a lot more than the first. Add some similar washes to the second half and THAT' would be a banging tune.

Nice work.

DJ-Stylus

yeah the more I listen to the bleep the more cack I think it sounds.

Nuff respect to you Sen for giving me a top idea - rather than using so many sounds I can fill the track with percusion and vary it more - if you listen carefully zinc does that to a lot of his tracks - subtle but to great respect.

I know what you're saying about the rez on the bline - I sorted most of it but real audio doesn't help - I'm gonna fully master and compress when its near finished and sort it all out.

I got you on a human element sen - I've been searching for a good sample to use but haven't found one so I left it instead of the usual dodgy timestrectched film samples you hear in so many tunes.

In all - biggup for the comments they've been most usefull

Sen

even just a girl going "oooh ooh oooh oh" "yeah yeah" would add VOLUMES to an already good tune.

Keep trying to find that sample! cause an even slighty dodgy sample can DESTROY an otherwise great track (case in point: most Trick or Treat productions)

tiger

hey, lay off the trick or treat crew.

their mc - tails, is too heavy for most of the trax he's on. they still big up the smooth style, and they deserve nuff respect for that!

Sen

Tigerman, I'm talking things like Sixth Sense and Exorcist - wikkid beats and bassline, but god awful sample that ruins it all.

Acid-D

i cant play this tune all i see is the buffering time goin up and up