!SUBZERO! feedback needed on this one!!

maco

http://www.angelfire.com/dc/maco21/subzero.rm

Feedback wanted!

DJ-Stylus

Had a listen but I don't like 8 bar so can't really comment on it

maco

ok, anyone like 8 bar?

maco

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Spunky

i like 8bar..

hmmm
the tune sounds a bit to similar all the way through. try making the drops stand out a bit more with a bit more variation.

make it a bit more darker aswell boss..

are u on msn ?

maco

ok, thnx for the advice! yer my email is macieszonek@hotmail.com, dont watch the long email adress

DJ Enta-T

the second 8 bar after the drop needs a sub bass behind the melodic bass to give it some oomph maybe with a sharp attack and i would consider droppin the deep bass from the 1st 8 bar for the 2nd.

im not keen on the distortion on the 8bar post drop but thats just a personal thing aswell as the lack of variation and melody. add some strings or a key melody
for me

enta t

maco

ok, ill see what i can do

DJSarki.com

Are you satisfied with producing this stuff? It's not very inspiring to be honest, I must have heard about 50 tunes like this, try something with a bit more originality! You know how to program your beats so why not translate that knowledge into making your melodies a bit more complex?

DJ Fusion

DJ Enta-T knows his sh1t - I would have said the same thing.
And I agree with DJ Sarki, the tune is too simple. I like 8Bar but this jars me honestly, make it a bit more lively. Honestly I'd never use that bass, sound kinda cheap. The only useful bit of advice is not to use that overused fruity sounding clap, its really annoying. Sorry to sound like im blowin off ur tune totally, but just not really feeling it.
Check my tune on this forum, safe.

maco

ok, iv had sum really good feedback! cheerz guyz

Caprie

yeah i got a tune called subzero, its tight, gonna be out soon