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RnB tune from Miss Gaby produced by me. feedback sought

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02-03-2003, 01:01 PM	#1
lady-j Fit Bird DJ Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 970	RnB tune from Miss Gaby produced by me. feedback sought what ya reckon? Chemistry

02-03-2003, 06:50 PM	#2
Sen Da Elda Moderata Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 4,513	It's a pretty slick little package The instrumentation is nearly perfect - right amount of smack, grit, and bounce to make it a winner. This is a much better mix than the last version that I heard! Much more effective mixing and more vocal presence. Can we get a bit more "power" and "oomph" behind the vocals? Perhaps strip down elements even more during verses? It should have more emphasis/forwardness on the vocals...it's still a tad busy and the focus gets lost... Good on ya J! Excellent vocals Gabz!

02-03-2003, 07:03 PM	#3
Fastlance Top Boy Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,127	i cant tell if it's pre-made loops or talent

02-03-2003, 07:14 PM	#4
46stepz Registered User Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 404	fastlance> u go on about those pre-made loops,why ? No1 uses premade loops, premade loops are for little kids that are starting out with musicproduction.

02-03-2003, 09:31 PM	#5
Shermon Jones S.O.I 2003 Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 535	apart from the main snare hit, i like it. the vocal production is pretty damn tidy.

02-03-2003, 09:32 PM	#6
Shermon Jones S.O.I 2003 Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 535	just heard the middle 8. some of the vocals sound a tad out of tune on the first bit but still a nice tune.

02-03-2003, 11:16 PM	#7
DJ Enta-T Viral Messenger Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 372	ditto to wot shermon said apart from i like that snare. nice track! u may wanna get rid of some of the rolled snare and scratch to put some more emphasis on the vox like sen said.

02-03-2003, 11:39 PM	#8
Sen Da Elda Moderata Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 4,513	Lance, it's likely not premade loops, as Lady J is rather talented and she would die before using prefab loops. And yeah, I agree with Shermon re: the middle eight tuning...it's most likely the ad libbing that's out of tune, or messing with the tune. Runs are hard to work with, cause they go in and out of tune. May be better to lose them.

03-03-2003, 12:30 AM	#9
Morph 2 Baad Productions Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 162	j you on msn i got some tips for ya if not call or speak to esi nice tho

03-03-2003, 04:40 PM	#10
L0z-enga BUTTER WOULDN'T MELT . . Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 311	Sounds quite good . . .

04-03-2003, 09:20 PM	#11
Fastlance Top Boy Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,127	Oh, Talent you say? AIGHT BIG THAT STUFF! I hate people who use premade loops and call it theres Big this once again

06-03-2003, 03:40 PM	#12
Nukleuz Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 93	that is extremly heavy!!!! i've added u to my msn lady j, yea.. i wanna ask u something..

06-03-2003, 04:27 PM	#13
Lady Sovereign Ess-Oh-Vee Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 4,661	Biggup my girls Lady J and Gabriella... Sounding heavy

28-03-2003, 08:53 PM	#14
Gabriella Vocalist, Lyricist, ect. Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 10	thankx everyone who likes the tune...and for the feed back!!!

10-04-2003, 12:02 AM	#15
Caprie Section 7 Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 913	whos da vocalist on da track??? i'm feeeeling da track still

25-04-2003, 07:31 PM	#16
Lady E$$-jª¥ S~A~R~A~H Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 276	im really feelin dis tune, good work! altho i do agree with sen that u need to emphasise the vocals in places. Still...I'd buy it fo' sure

28-04-2003, 01:59 PM	#17
bionicbooty Who loves ya, baby Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 266	I pretty much agree with sen. There is a LOT of beauty in this track. You two did a great job on the collab especially divided by however many thousand miles. Some additional comments: It takes a while to get to the chorus for a pop song, if that's the direction. As well as I didn't know what the chorus was for real until the second time through. I thought the silence/flanged vocal drop into the second chorus set it off nice, maybe do something like that the first time through to say: "Here's the chorus". And Sen is right to suggest simplificaton of the verses. The bridge is a little off compared to the rest of the track. Good writing on the vocals. I'm guessing it was Gaby. You keep it going, sista. Maybe one day we'll get around to doing something, too. Big up to both of you.

01-05-2003, 04:41 PM

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Gabriella

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Thanks again for the comments/suggestions/compliments everyone, they are much appreciated.

Caprie, Im the vocalist on the track love

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Originally posted by bionicbooty
I pretty much agree with sen. There is a LOT of beauty in this track. You two did a great job on the collab especially divided by however many thousand miles.

Some additional comments:
It takes a while to get to the chorus for a pop song, if that's the direction. As well as I didn't know what the chorus was for real until the second time through. I thought the silence/flanged vocal drop into the second chorus set it off nice, maybe do something like that the first time through to say: "Here's the chorus". And Sen is right to suggest simplificaton of the verses.

The bridge is a little off compared to the rest of the track.

Good writing on the vocals. I'm guessing it was Gaby. You keep it going, sista. Maybe one day we'll get around to doing something, too.

Big up to both of you.
”

Bionic thank you for your compliment and suggestions. Maybe one day we could get around to it, Im all game

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