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PLS check my tune - it aint finished! but i need advice

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08-04-2002, 11:08 AM	#1
Dj Steffan D Registered User Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 152	PLS check my tune - it aint finished! but i need advice right its my first production! and looking round at all the foriums this is the best place to get constructive critasism! this is only a week old! like my produceing - so dont exspect much but i want to continue this as i feel it has potential! please dont take notice of the letters of my name in this! its just so i know what it sounds like as an intro! my main i dea is to create a dub for an intro and one just the actuall tune!! here is the link - i think ull have to paste in real player! pnm://www.angelfire.com/music4/djsteffandaudio/intro.rm once again thanks for looking and listing its much appreciated and all comments are welcome! especially the ones that will help this to improve!! thanx! Dj Steffan D http://www.DjSteffanD.com

08-04-2002, 12:53 PM	#2
DJ FRAMPSTER Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 1,974	yes this is queit good for ure 1'st attempt m8 biig iit up. Im sorry i aint say'n more jst bad time @ d mo

08-04-2002, 01:21 PM	#3
cole-z matt Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 164	thats heavy m8, especially for a first time. what programmes do you use then?

08-04-2002, 02:41 PM	#4
Dj Steffan D Registered User Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 152	i have fruity and soundforge!! thanks fo the comments lads!! i am updateing that link later peeps!! so check it m8!! cole - z i could give u more info about getting fruity over Msn bruv PLS NB: THIS IS NO WHERE NEAR COMPLETION djsteffand@hotmail.com www.djsteffand.com Last edited by Dj Steffan D : 08-04-2002 at 02:42 PM.

08-04-2002, 04:54 PM	#5
lyonz The Shnozzle Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 108	yeah man i think that $$$$s phatt especially for a first!! big it up

08-04-2002, 05:21 PM	#6
Dj Steffan D Registered User Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 152	cheers m8 wat u think it is missing ne 1?

09-04-2002, 12:20 AM	#7
Dj Steffan D Registered User Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 152	Updated the link to a few things i have added! changed b line slightly addeda few effects for the build up ( ie the hammer and the riseing sound - also the closed doors at the start) what you think? all comments welcome!! Cheers!! pnm://www.angelfire.com/music4/djsteffandaudio/intro.rm take a while to load but will stream if pasted in realplayer :d cheers

09-04-2002, 02:05 AM	#8
Top$ta Registered User Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 111	this tune aint bad at all the drums r nice very i like the sfx and vocals 2 but that bline is weak in my opionion it dont match the raceyness of ur drums but heavy 4 a dubplate big up

09-04-2002, 01:20 PM	#9
Acid-D Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 711	at the beginin were the drums stop and start the gap sounds a bit rong to me but prob not to any 1 else. the draging bac sample lol i have that . but all good

09-04-2002, 01:23 PM	#10
Dj Steffan D Registered User Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 152	yes cheers m8! i agree but im finding it hard to get a good bline with it#!! wat i might do is attemt several different version all with different b lines!! then choose the best 1! some people say they would buy it if it wasnt an intro - but i only am 70% done so all good i say! more comments welcome

09-04-2002, 01:31 PM	#11
Dj Steffan D Registered User Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 152	yer lol i have just updated the link!!!! and that is what im have done!! i like the door slamming effect!! but dosnt go well with the actuall tune i think ill change that!! cheers

09-04-2002, 08:02 PM	#12
Dj Steffan D Registered User Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 152	Bump this Beast!! i have also updated the link

12-04-2002, 01:44 PM	#13
Dj Steffan D Registered User Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 152	bump this Gem

12-04-2002, 09:13 PM	#14
DOES IT MATTER stamp collectin iza crime Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 423	i thought it was ok....for a first time thing the bass line is a bit weak.......drums are gd.......i preferd the start to the beginning

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