PLEASEEEEEEE CLICK HERE!!!! (please)

paulyc

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ok, iv listened to all your comments, and taken down my previous tunes, updated my first one massively, completly changed the bass in most parts, changed some of the beats, and changed the layout of the tune.

http://bwcarter.users.btopenworld.com/intro.rm >>>

this is the newest version, please listen and give me some more feedback as this is probably the best version of the tune so far...

(The tune is uploading at the moment so if u try n click it now it wont work, i will reply in the thread below when it has fully uploaded so u can listen to it. It is at 41% at the moment uploading ...hold tight!)

MC-Ego-B

Its a nice sound put personally I'd built up the intro rather then drop it straight in like that. Like the beat its nice and rolling - loving that metallic snare roll.

Bassline is pretty jig but there's a few frequency clashes in the samples. Try compressing it and it might sort it out. It doesn't sound a major thing but in the conversion to vinyl it will make a difference. If you get it cut to dub get it cit at 33RPM to boost the treble and it should be fine (presuming EQ and master it first)

I don't mean to sound $$$$ty but surely if its your intro then you should have your name on in otherwise how will people know its you

paulyc

cheers 4 the comments, yeh im waiting vocals, although im not sure if im gonna make it an intro or just leave it how it is and build it up as a normal tune.

... going to listen to ur mcing now....

MC-Ego-B

Safe

paulyc

jus' bumping this above my other thread...

dj raptor

“	Originally posted by MC-Ego-B I'd built up the intro rather then drop it straight in like that.	”

yeh but its gona be a first one coz its a intro... so a long intro b4 the bass would just get boring.... if u know what i mean....

mc vortex

I like the little intro

tunes quiet good 2 mate

nice production

paulyc

<<<<<<<http://bwcarter.users.btopenworld.com/intro.rm>>>>>>>

The tune is now uploaded fully, if you can be bothered to listen then please do as this is a completly new version of the tune.

thanks

PaulyC

paulyc

bump

SuperSonic

Yea dat onez heavy....
Love da placement of da beats on dis.......
I thought da first one woz heavy but it juss gets beta!
Big it up....