new tune.......check it

paulyc

ok IV changed the tune quite a bit, taken out half of the guitar sounds and added a reverb on the ones that remian. The bit at the very end isnt too good where the bass is really long but ignore it also the little chords of guitar to the end arent great, ne way, it sounds a bit better now i think!!!


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paulyc

DJ-Stylus

Is this the same one I heard the other day? id you get my email?

paulyc

i got ur email, nah its changed quite a bit!

DJ-Stylus

Sounds much better with the extra hats - the bass is a bit loud though its distorting quite a bit. Feeling them chords aswell - maybe you could put a vibrato effect on some of the to give it a real guitar kinda feel

SUPERSTAR SINISTA

i like it sounds good just needs polishing

DOES IT MATTER

i liked it but....i didn't like the instrument you used for the melody part....basslines good....beats good

Miss Gaby

Pauly C, I like it...just needs to be polished up and sinister said. But I like it...

Dj Steffan D

not feeling them play day strings :S Bass is to dirty for the strings!!
no offence this sounds like something of a mega Drive computer game!! and its all coz of the strings m8! ( golden Axe )

but then again the quality of the audio on my real player aint all that as itall sounds distorted!
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this could be good - it has potential m8!!!

would like to hear this in Mp3 format - see if the strings are as bad as they sound!

beat is nice bline is ok!!

Big Up

MC Carnage

yea it does kinda sound like somethin off a mega drive game in a way. the melody is a bit cheesy but the rest of it gels kinda sweet. beats are very nice as usual.

paulyc

thanks for listening every1. cheers for the ram carnage.

ne more?...

DJ SOLO

not sure if im feelin this one mate - sorry just not my kind of thing, sorry not sure what else to say

lady-j

dont really like this sorry...

melody needs sorted
drums need sorted

there needs to be more structure
i dont know what to tell you
keep going though. it's the only way to learn.

DJ FRAMPSTER

yea man this tune is kinda hev u kno..i say u should add some nice vocals n exsperiment wiv it a bit more and c wha u come up wiv

paulyc

cheers every1/. ne 1else/??

dj raptor

me me!

yeh its heavy. different from ure usual stuff. keep workin on it mate

paulyc

cheers for listening m8.

ne more.?

SuperSonic

Yea dats heavy mate!
Nice vocals and a bit of happy mcin would sound mad on that mate!

bionicbooty

I didn't really feel it until around :35 seconds, then it all starts to fit together.

The section at 1:25 is real nice. REAL NICE.

There's some distortion issues, but that could be the .rm file itself.