NEW SPEED GARAGEY TRACK.

Deztruction

Hi. this is a speed garage type track that i started yesturday. it needs more work (few more instruments). but can i plz have sum comments.

cheers

Dezz

http://eric.dodman.users.btopenworld.com/Kathy.rm

Trilogy

You've made a techno track here mate, sorry.

Deztruction

ok.

how's it techno?

[agx]

LISTENING LIVE:
so far, this break (at the intro) at best sounds like armand van helden house beat. You people gimme joke. u think ur making garage when u dont even know how its made technically (i.e quantise).

the break sounds well compressed, i think its a loop that u jacked personally.

ok, at the drop, I can see where u were going with a kinda "speed garagey" style RIP/d99/187 LD tune but it needs a hell of a lot of tweaking.
the bass needs less of the 2002-style unsexiness/$$$$ness. the bass is CLOSE to being in the right style tho.

the lead is gay, sounds like any random synth sound and needs locking. i dunno what u can replace it with cos this is too rough for a rhodes or organ riff. an organ riff in places might work, cos Ive heard it done on this type of oldskool.

the break is just too armand van helden. it sounds like house cos u dont know how to make a ukg 4/4 break technically, do u? exactly.

nice vox which fits where u were going. cudda used it more like. chopping etc.

its ok, apart from technically.

Deztruction

the break i made myself with drum sounds i sampled from a speed garage remix of a shola ama tune.

it isnt a loop.

the lead is actually an organ.

yes the bass does need changing a bit. i agree with that.

urmm how can u say i dont know how 2 make a 4/4 garage beat? im sorry but that is a gay thing to say. u havnt heard everytune ive ever dun. so how cud u say that?

u think everyone on here is thick and is talentless (not saying i have ne), but, u have to realise that we aren't using all the equipment say a studio may have. Im sorry if u think 2002 garage is $$$$, fair enuff, but that doesnt mean ALL the producers that wer'nt making stuff back then (cos i was 12, like most on here) are $$$$.

thanks 4 ur comment tho. cos i agree with the bass bit and maybe the organ bit aswell.

cheers.

Trilogy

Ok sorry mate I'll give you a bit more feedback...

Beat is nice, it's got that old skool flava, the flanged and filtered vocals are nice. That organ that comes in has a happy hardcore feel to it for some reason, perhaps its the chords and the little synth thing underneath. The strings seem to be just laid down for the sake of it tho, possibly needs more elements to take away from that and make them more subtle. The vocals are nice and there's no problem with keys and stuff but once it drops the bline is just too technoey - speed garage had more "wah wah" sounds. I suppose the bline'd fit with modern style 4/4 but the beat doesn't, so it's like a quandry between the two.

As I said before in another post, technically very good but it doesn't sound like garage. Download some Tuff Jam, Gant, New Horizons etc. and listen to the way they structure and use elements, with that kind of guide I could see you making some quality garage.

Deztruction

ok cheers mate. thats more helpful.lol

DJ-Stylus

I aint gonna argue on if it sounds like garage or not - sounds heavy to me

DJ Enta-T

ditto stylus. why should all garage songs have the same break or b produced in the same way. is that not squashing evolution. any way leave the poor buggar alone, ur dissin the guy behind the seven times platinum album "White Ladder"

[agx]

if u dont know what quantise is, then I laugh at you, whoever you are. UKGs main characteristic before 2002 was just that. Its been the backbone of UKG technically since 1994.

DJ Groomy

nice track dezzy... nuff respect!!

Cud see this selling