NEW HIP HOP JOINT

DJ Enta-T

ive just started this track for a competition, main bones really but its quite progressed.

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/nigel.hopgood/HH.rm
(copy and paste into real player)

im pleased with the first part, not keen on the second sorta section, lil organ riff is a bit gay and the strings dont really work, squeaky thing is definitely going too. but just tell me wot u think

more feedback the betta

Enta-T
I&I

Fastlance

some dumb suggestions by me, Fix up on the drums, make them louder and a bigger snare(gota remeber the beat is the most important part in hiphop), the melody seems pretty straight to me. You got some potential here!