new bit, need feedback

Fastlance

Http://f-l-x.net/triple0.rm


Where do I go from here?

Shermon Jones

that string melody is wicked. but im not really feeling the melody that sounds like a phone dial tone noise. it sounds a bit out of time...its probs meant to sound like that , just not my thing.

well now you could just do the obvious and drop it into a big square wavey bassline..or i duno., add mc'ing or something?

Fastlance

phone dial tone huh? alright ill check that


but im still lost

Gabriella

i love the string melody in this tune....like where your going with it except when it gets to that noise that starts at :21.