Need Opinions on a track just finished!!

Zero_Pro

Listen to this and tell me what u think....

Might add MC vocals, how do u think that would sound?

http://www.zero-productions.co.uk/Ripple.asf

DJ Enta-T

wot player plays asf extension files?

Fastlance

windows media player

Zero_Pro

So has anyone actually listened to it yet then?

Lady E$$-jª¥

it said dat tha page cudnt be displayed.........

was lookin forward to hearin it aswell!

Zero_Pro

Oh bugger, i will upload it as again! one min!

Zero_Pro

right at least one of these has got to work!!!

www.zero-productions.co.uk/Ripple.asf (Windows Media Player)

www.zero-productions.co.uk/Ripple.mp3 (MP3 Duh!)

www.zero-productions.co.uk/Ripple.rm (Real Audio)

The real audio one aint to good quallity! but try them anyway!

If not vistie my site, its on there with lots of other tracks i have done!

www.zero-productions.co.uk

Cheers

DJ Enta-T

dirty, big tune. like it. but it lacks somethin. seems a little shallow, maybe some strings or somethin. just needs somethin else. also the beat seems to b rushin compared to the bass.
id buy it probably

Lady E$$-jª¥

[QUOTE]Originally posted by DJ Enta-T
also the beat seems to b rushin compared to the bass.[/QUOTE

dats a heavy beat, fink that the tune gets away wit the rushin.

id buy it

also i fink dat MC vocals might be somethin to look into and experiment with. if it dont work den u can just leave it as it is.

Zero_Pro

Yeah I think it needs something else as well!

I have been mucking around with a few bits but i cant seem to get it right!

So do u think i should tone the beats down then?

Thanks for your advice!

Zero_Pro

ok I have done a few bits to it, here is the new version!

I added a couple of bits to the intro and changed the main beat very slightly...

Let me know what u think

http://www.zero-productions.co.uk/Ripplenew.mp3

Cheers

DJ Enta-T

right that new link aint workin for me. wot i meant by rushed, is that the hi hat fills in every gap of the song, part of a good track for me is the bit inbetween the sounds, ag will gun me for this but where it sorta minimalises out, bad english but hey. thats just personal taste tho ya know coz S J thinks different.
heavy track tho.

Zero_Pro

Oh, aint doing too well with the links am i!!

Ok well once again here are some different ones to try!

http://www.zero-productions.co.uk/Ripplenew.mp3 (MP3)

http://www.zero-productions.co.uk/Ripplenew.asf (Windows Media Player)

http://www.zero-productions.co.uk/Ripplenew.rm (Real Audio)

Once again try not to use the real audio one, the quaility always comes out $$$$!

Cheers

DJ Enta-T

its workin
ill comment when its d/l

DJ Enta-T

dark and scary. i think with the intro u shudnt use as deep a bass sound as it makes the drop seem more insignificant. this track is hektik. definitely needs two mixes of it. a minimal one and a slightly more breaky one.

dirt
bigup urself

I&I

Zero_Pro

yeah I might just tone the intro bass down, I think it sounds good, just needs to be less over powering as u say, well im getting one of my MC's (MC Zani) to do some lyrics on it over the weekend, see how that sounds!

DJ Enta-T

safe