MC'in - 1month. Lookin for pointers/what im doing right and wrong..

NightMare -MC-

http://www.angelfire.lycos.com/droi..._b2b_dazzla.ram

I AM THE 2nd MC..

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aight. It me again. a follow up from my "Mc'in 2 weeks" post. This is a clip of me mc'n after 1 month. Im b2b with some1 (dont worry about him if u dont want)

i think my problems are:

- my voice
- my lyrics
- timing @ some points

and some little nitty stuff.


could u lot tell me what u think i need to do better and what im doing right. bare in mind i only been goin 1 month.


thx

Dazzla

DJ Fusion

Oi the first guy made your voice sound good. Ur not bad for 1 month. SLLLLLLOOOOOOWWWWW down man! U got a VERY similar voice to me and i dont think im good enuf to mc still but keep at it and work on everything gradually. Sit there with a riddim on and write something original, then put another riddim on then spit the same thing on that then change the lyrics to suit, etc. Just some pointers. DONT TALK $$$$ about gats, guns, coz u aint that, ok? Chat real style like Heartless crew do, U kno, girls n ting, whatevas real life to YOU. Sorry for rambling but I feel strongly bout it, get me. NOT all this GUNSHOT wiley this wiley that. Be original. Peace and good luck with the MCing, dont chat to impress, chat to entertain.
Rich

NightMare -MC-

aight big up what ya said. thx man. chat on msn :P

mc_saber

your $$$$s alright for a month still, the only thing i say work on is your timing, other than that, keep writing and keep it original!

NightMare -MC-

yah i didnt realise how incredibly poor my timing was, i had never mc'd to that tune b4 hence a bit whack, but my timing is ALOT better on tracks i have ridden b4.. but thx for the pointers. much appreciated.

mc_saber

no worries blud, just keep workin at it, oh the other thing was lay off the gunshot, ukg has got 2 much trouble in it without us new mc's promoting guns,

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