LIBERTYX FULL VOCAL REMIX

paulyc

THIS IS crap, the bassline is boring and repetitive

the tune is crap.

the strings for the chorus is a rubbish sound.

it took me about 2 hours altogether.

thanks for listening.

(i dont stand a F.ckin chance!!!!! muhahahahaha)

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this is only a first version and it took 2 hours, i will be changing it alot for the proper comp, cos this versions crap.

thanks.

paulyc

bionicbooty

If YOU think it sucks, why would you want us to listen? I checked it - I like the beat best when the 16th-note hats are NOT happening.

paulyc

because i need feedback on how to improve, iv bin listening to the same tune for 2hours, my ears are immune to ne problems!

thanks for listening mate.

DJSarki.com

At least he's honest, and believe me, he is. Were you in that poll for best up n coming producer on the forum? How?

paulyc

it took me 2 hours.

DJSarki.com

You should get rid of that string that is over most of the verse and chorus, or put some effect on it, but you're better than Stylus mate.

DJ_Twista

dats a bit harsh mate....

DOES IT MATTER

ummm......the notes that u used were good....not to sure about the guitary sound....it's ok but not bad

DOES IT MATTER

sarki, d'you know your name means rice wine in japanese

paulyc

stylus is a good producer, at least 10 times better than me.

and sarki, i fall aslep listening to ur tunes. the fact is im 16, your 20 something. therefore making me for my age significantly better than u.

Slapstcik Comedy

lol

DJSarki.com

Well not really, because at 16 I was in an indie band playing out LIVE and not at Bedroom Nation. But cheers for the comments.

paulyc

sad ####!

hahahahahahahahahaha.

DJSarki.com

ah i get it .. a type of music you don't like .. = sad

general music skills? you got no idea mate.

ps. not worried, just like to explain these things to make it nice and clear for you

paulyc

iv got music skills i been playing piano since about 5.
i used to play drums.

"ah i get it .. a type of music you don't like .. = sad" well u didnt like my tune, therefore u just dissed instead of giving feedback.

$$$$ it m8, i dont want no beef, explain how to improve my tune instead of being a $$$$!

DJSarki.com

You know whats wrong with it! You have stated it in your first post!

We both have music skills, well done. I am ultimately more mature though, don't come along here giving it your Mr Big Man act, because it will not impress anyone sunshine.

paulyc

.........??

paulyc

as i said this took me 2hours, it isnt my proper version.

dj raptor

From what u said i thought it would be absolute $$$$, but its actually pretty good. U just need to work on it tho, make it a bit different coz at the moment its nothing special.