l8test tune worth a listen

Acid-D

here it here http://dustbrother.host.sk/Acid-D/sub.ram
please leave ya advise and coments

(ps: sub.ram has nothin to do with the name )

Sen

Variety is the spice of life.

I think I heard that some where.

All the elements are here.

there's just not a lot of variation going on with them

Nice stutterstep snare pattern, good hats, like the vocals

bassline is a little long.

But.

It's all in a very boring arrangement.

no energy.

you need highs and lows.

you need variation. it's too cut an paste now.

Vary your bline, vary your drum pattern (please!) an things will go better.

Need some fills.

Acid-D

working on it but i gona leave the beat i like it.... but i do more to the bass (and how could u have herd it b4 i made it all my self acsept the reefa man samples its a remix of Top$a'z tune )

Sen

I was referring to the whole "Variety is the spice of life" saying, not your song. And yeah, I know where the sample's from.

That aside, it doesn't matter if you like the beat or not...I'm not saying remove it or change it...just VARY it...which means like, every 8 bars, end it with 2 snare hits instead of just 1 or whatever.

It's all very samey, very cut and pasty, very boring to the ear.

Like I said, the elements are good. It's the arranging that needs work.