Kamikaze NEW TUNE

Oli

during the chorus, (when u aint chatting) its a bit dry. You need to add something in more than the whining synth, cant really describe it as anything else.

i understand it aint finished and your gonna put more vocals in there, and it'll definently need it. this choon aint got enough to stand up on its own. try adding in a new section or some sort of melody line

hope you can take this as constructive criticism this time