I've decided that........

Deztruction

i would make a gay type of tune that seems 2 b popular at the moment.

infact i made two. one was dun in 10 minutes tho as a piss take. but sum sed they liked it (enta-t [wierdo :P]).

so plz chess them and comment. i know there a lot different 2 my normal stuff

http://eric.dodman.users.btopenworld.com/Greeper.rm

http://eric.dodman.users.btopenworld.com/Giggle.rm


cheers

Dezz

DJ-Stylus

I actually like the intro on the 2nd one - nice melody. Rest is prety pants though but I'm sure you already know this

MC Makka

These tunes are aight - the 1st one is pretty 'not good' at all - lol sorry m8

as stylus sed the intro 4 the second tunes is pretty good but the rest is not

Harley

Not feelin number one mate.

Intro on number 2 is really nice, would be more suited to a nice vocal tune though.

The drop on number 2 is not bad, there's a bit too much going on in the background, minimalise the claps down a bit and sharpen the bass, maybe add a bit of attack on it.

Woorby and moogy sounds tend not to work on these 8 bar things, I find a nice deep or stabby bassline works well on the first pattern, the second pattern normally has to have more energy than the first to make 8 bar work properly.

I know you'll laugh at the depth i've gone into here, but whether I'm producing an MJ Cole track or a Musical Mob track, I tend to look deeper than "Just two patterns that last 8 bars" !!

Take my advice and i'm sure you'll have something sellable

[agx]

“	Originally posted by Harley I tend to look deeper than "Just two patterns that last 8 bars"..take my advice ...	”

so 8 bar gangster techstep is a science now?