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Howling

Alright Peepz

I have been busy in the lab making some phat HipHop beats and would like your opinions as i'am seriously considering getting these couple of tracks pressed.

http://ra.shockingbreaks.com:8080/r...raiaan/Grime.rm

This track is almost complete just needs a little bit of touching up

http://ra.shockingbreaks.com:8080/r...instrumental.rm

This one is a little bit more laid back than the one above but still a track no doubt


If you could check these out and give me some feedback/comments i would be thankfull....thx


Ps My server only allows one listener at a time for my stream so if you cant lock on first time it means some one else is listening so try later and all should be sweet.

DJ Enta-T

first ones not really my style but it sounds alrite. dont like the jungle loops u throw in if they are loops, might not be, and also has a weird flow when the the bongo-ish sounding snare comes in. needs vocals or somethin

couldnt get the second to work

DJ Enta-T

ill try again later, like u said.

Howling

ok thx for your comments i think the rolling snares compliment
it well but maybe it isnt your taste...i think the jungle loops work but i just need to place them else were in the track to get it more tight if u naw what i mean....obviously these track would sound beter with a rapper but i'am still currently looking for lyricst so if u kno ne1 or any one out there wants to ride these beats lemme know....one

Fastlance

To make the first track hiphop, you would need to remove all those jungle sounds, because it just doesnt mix


2nd one doesnt work for me

Howling

I will be keeping the jungle sounds they jus need to be arranged better to be more tight sounding.....I fixed the second one so if u could review that i would be greatfull....cheers

Shermon Jones

would be good as an intro for a dnb song

but as a hip hop song its not as good as it good be.

Nukleuz

i agree.. take out the jungle sounds and replace the bass with a simple sine wave or similar sub..

Howling

ok i might discard the jungle loops and change the bass and generally work on it a bit more....what do u think of the second track though....any opinions? thanks!