Give it to me (Dark BreakBeat Garage Tune)

Jay Beat

http://www.btinternet.com/~coxell/givit.mp3

Hope you all like.

Any feedback greatfully receieved.

Jay Beat

Fastlance

Okay feed back as it goes


dont like the synth thingy in the start lose it with somthing else

the crowed effects fit, and the vocal bit doesnt work find somthing else

the beat is nice! it could use a bit of hi hats?
the bass is nice!

the break is nice i like that


but i cant really say to much because its so low quality.. to low for a sample.

Shermon Jones

the start sound i quite like actually, i dont like that stab noise though. The bassline is quite good.

vocal is alright, in some bits it doesnt work, but i still think sounds quite good. the beat is quite nice.

at about 1:30, it sounds a bit to crowded for me.

not a bad track

Shermon Jones

i like the break down at 2minutes, that is really nice. reverse beats are a bit gay, but that string is wicked. nice break as well

Jay Beat

Thanks for all the comments,

Ive removed the vocal and reverse kick.

I dont want to remove the stab until I can think of something better to replace it with. Do any of you have an idea of what would sound better in place of the stabs?

Ive kept the synth at the beggining (its only in there for 20 odd seconds)

Ive found a nice agressive vocal sample to use in place of the female one. That same female vocal is going to be used in a breakbeat hardcore tune which will be released later this year so its probably best I dont use it in two tunes.

I'll upload the version with changes tommorow night and I'll make sure its a better quality version.

Thanks again for the feedback.

Jay

Shermon Jones

fancy showing me the Breakbeat hardcore tune?

Jay Beat

I havent got that tune online but check your private messages for details of how to hear other tunes by myself.

Jim