Dodg E - Tell me.rm

[agx]

I clicked ur site and listenin to this "vocal garage" tune.

The vox is off.

The organ is poorly EQd and reverbed off, not keen on the riff

the break is so flat, is it House or 4/4 UKG, cos it sounds like house, its too empty and no swing.

the tune doesnt sit well with itself.

i know the snare is a native fruity sample and its cheap and $$$$e and u cant use it for any real music, partly, cos u'll get sued for not buying fruity, partly cos its a cheap snare.

song had no EQing or treatment

arrangement was poor and didnt drive tune along

ending was awful, it just locked off

Like I said: Im scared of doing 5 min tunes and I been at this for 9 months and I do compress, I do mix down ish, I do EQ etc, I just aint got the front. Why slave over 5 min tunes when ur new to producing? Not even now am I confident enuff to make full 5 min songs. U shud make little loops and try and progress in that area before u go off on one and make some 5 mintute mess.

good luck

46stepz

9 month, wow =)

MC Makka

AG not to sound to feisty but i have seen sum of ur posts on here an all u seem to do is completely critasize everybody else'z work

for a change y dont u post sum sh!t up in here an let every1 else critasize you

[agx]

kama kaze, critiiciicicicsm whatever, is how u improve. I think if musical mob got early criticism before releasing pulse x, it might have been better produced. why arselick? Thats no good to anyone. most people will arselick theyre bredrins or ppl they know online when they REALLY need an HONEST non-emotionly clouded (like a good friend/cousin/bro etc) opinion. thats how u improve truss.

I got a cussin for the first kinda track-ish I made, and altho I was screwing at the time: 1: they were RIGHT, 2: it helped me improve.

too much arselicking inside this section. if ppl are knocking out 3 snares and a pizz sample, u gotta break it to em that thats just not music. Maybe I shud be a UKG chairman or suttin, cos a lot of this stuff on this site will prolly get pressed AND THATS SCAREY.

DJ DoDg-E

djaguk

Why post about 5 replies to one of my posts, then visit my site and tell people to listen to one of my tunes... when you havent even posted one of yours... thats if you can even make a tune.
WOW!!! 9 months man... $$$$ you must be $$$$ hot! your dj'in skills must be better than EZ, and your producing skills must be better than TUFF JAM!!

You really the man you know that!
you must have some obsession with my tunes or something, posting a new thread with a link to one of my tunes?? who do u think you are?!!!

You think people improve by having their stuff cussed by someone who knows fuk all, and has been into garage for 9months?!

mmm, fix up, stop listenin to my tunes... if they are that bad why listen to em?!

[agx]

WHAT THE $$$$!

I BEEN TRYNA MAKE GARAGE FOR 9 MONTHS NOT LISTENING!

NUMBER 2 I THOUGHT AMONGST ALL THE PEOPLE LICKIN U OUT, U CUD DO WITH SOME ADVICE, I KNOW I DONT DRESS IT UP IN PINK RIBBONS BUT I SAY WHAT U NEED TO FIX IN ORDER TO MAKE A BETTER VYNIL PRESSING MATE.

Dont get vex.

And why did everyone misread me. I said, I been at this 9 months meaning I HAVENT DARED TO MAKE A SONG!!! IM TOO $$$$!! I HAVENT GOT THE RIGHT TOOLS! IM LIKE YOURSELF!

When I post suttin up here, please feel free to pick at it, I wanna hear ANYTHING THAT WILL HELP ME IMPROVE IT, not hate now, I mean real tips.

ANyway, I wont review anymore of ur stuff since i have to walk on eggshells. ok sorry, tunes fine how it is, get it pressed, mmm nice ass licky licky...

is that what u want? OR REAL HELP?

I been at this 9 months but are u compressing ur breaks? Have u EQd ur bass? Have u established whats gonna take up the lowend and highend of ur mix? Have u arranged it in verses and choruses or just chorus with some slight changes??

This is the help u need bredrin but fine, get licked out. It aint gonna help u in the long run.

sorry if yall offended cos Im too real.