Check My Tune

mrbenji

hi guys this is my first ever attemt at trying to make a tune its not finnished yet but ive been working on it all day and i want some peeps opinions on it :-)

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mrbenji

forgot the link
www.benjisbeats.co.uk/rm/newmix.ram


:-)

chungun

link wont work, Il try it again later!

DJ SILO

I Did like the original D&B version by 'Shy FX', so that in itsellf is hard to top. It's ok, just few things are off and maybe need to tweaked. If this is really your first tune, I give you full props, because my first tune contained about 6 instruments.
Give yourself a round of applause, because this is a mighty first time effort of making a tune.

I do like the kind of '4 Floor', 'Breakbeat' pattern rolled into one, very different.

Shermon Jones

bassline doesn't contain any bass and is a bit weak. the sample of the vocal is ok.But i think u need to work on basslines and beat.

not bad for a first attempt though.