Breakbeat Track

CLAZZ_A

Verson_1
http://www.angelfire.com/music4/clazz_a/BrkTrk1_1.rm

Version_2_"UPDATE"
http://www.angelfire.com/music4/cla...reakbeatTrk2.rm

Im looking to add some vocal samples @ a later date

Just like to c what reaction this track gets b4 i start adding the samples

**UPDATES NOW UP DUE TO THE RESPONSE FROM THE UPTOWN FORUM**

Which version u feeling? Marks outta 10? Would you play it o your set if it was on White Label?

Biggup....!

Cheers

Acid-D

Quite good m8 i like it wen it gets to about 1min 30 . wen it gets to the propper bass line its heavy m8

CLAZZ_A_2002

T-O-P

Oli

Acid D is right, before 1.30 you cant hear much bass, this may be down to the real player file but if not u know wot to do (MORE BASS)

The beats are arranged nicely just maybe a different sound or kit ? They feel a bit weak to me

Otherwise nice choon

CLAZZ_A_2002

K nice one mate, get a few of your mates to come check out the tune b4 i get back to the drawing board...

By the way you on radio oli mate?

Cheers for the comments any how

Biggup

CLAZZ_A_2002

Also what version are u both on about
Number 1/2

Cheers

Keep it coming

Acid-D

i think iv only played the 1st version i play the 2cond 1 in a sec

Acid-D

y wont the 1s link work no more!!!!!! and 2cond 1 is good put it on the flip

CLAZZ_A_2002

Dunno Acid m8 why it aint working i may have del. it yesterday or something
However im going to be working on it tomoro so i should have a little update on the trk

So how do you see this track? would it sell in shops?
What DJs could you see playing this trk on there sets and what MCs would rip it apart?

Biggup

Brickhouse

As has already been stated, track 1 is a dead link.

Notes on track 2: A little more snare in the beginning would be nice. Sounds like you've got a good intro working, and in all seriousness, there should be a lot more tracks out there with long intros w/o the bassline for 1+ minutes. Allows for a lot more room for the DJ to play around with it, and if you want the b-line to come in sooner, just cue up the record later. As for the bassline itself, I like the notes but I'm not feeling whatever instrument you added on top of the bassline about 4 measures into it. A couple of the notes sound like mischords, but maybe that's the effect you're going for. Also, the drums need to come through stronger overall. Obviously for it to sell or anything, it would need to be at least 5 minutes long, but it would be easy to do that by just having the little breakdown, cutting back into the bassline, and then on a third goround with the bassline warp things up a bit (the basslick formula).

What are you programming with? The whole thing still sounds like a midi sequence, and while that's never stopped anyone from selling their records before, I wouldn't hold your breath for massive distribution.....

Sorry to sound critical. I do like the track, just I'm better at pointing out the bad than the good...

Sen

Can't get either link to work

CLAZZ_A_2002

Sen Link 2 is still working bro..

Yeah brickhouse nice one for that report yeah i like that sorta response nice and detailed so i know whats Hot and whats not.

Cheers for that yeah

Biggup

Keep the comments coming


LINK 1 IS ((NOT)) working

Out 2 Sen Try again mate

Sen

will do tonight...but I couldn't get link 2 to work either...

CLAZZ_A_2002

Just tryed it again links working perfect m8

Sen

coolio...must have been bad timing

Sen

Finally! Got it working! And it was worth the wait...nice tight rhythm...I'm really liking how the drums are patterned after the "dubplate" samples...

your lead marimba bouncy stuff is a little too off key tho...

the head $$$$ pads you got going on when the shuffly beat kicks is dope.

When it kicks into 4/4 it gets interesting...

in your bline, you know it's 3 notes, then 2 notes?

change the 4th and 5th notes to a little lower...you may get a bit better tuning and some darker vibes.

I'm really loving that pad sound tho.

CLAZZ_A_2002

Alright nice one Sen mate

Im looking to do a little update soon dont really wana do 2 much as i may have to change it bk etc

Biggup

CLAZZ_A_2002

your lead marimba bouncy stuff is a little too off key tho...

Q:What u mean m8?

Sen

pitch wise, and sound wise it sticks out a bit...it's not too bad (so don't need to change it too much) but if you did, the tune would gel a little better you know?