Another Old Skool 4X4 Track From me (Vocal) PLEASE LISTEN ALL!!

Zero_Pro

Let me know what u all think... the acapella is cheesey as hell!

but im more interested on what people think of the general production...

Cheers People!!

http://www.zero-productions.co.uk/pol.rm

Tempo

Quite nice You can hear what a difference the shuffle makes on your end of bar snares. It gives the beat more of a swing and makes it not so flat sounding like house beats are.

The chords are nice (if i do say so myself lol), gives the track a certain warmness to it. You may want to add a high constant string to the breakdown to give it more atmosphere. Not sure about the choice of acapella but the timestretching sounds good.

Bassline needs turning up though. In headphones it probably would sound good but through my crappy PC speakers i could barely hear it. Keep it up mate

Zero_Pro

Yeah big up Tempo for the chords over the beat

Well as u said i have been making the track with headphones on cos its late, so I will have to change the bass 2morow!

yeah the acapella is well cheesey! To be honest, i was concentrating on the track... i might see if i can find something better!

Keep the feed back coming people!

leerees

You'd be better off taking the acapella off, cos it dont go at all. i cant really comment on the production cos that acapella just makes me switch it off anyway.

intro seemed quite good.

post up a vocaless version.

DJ SILO

You know what, it's different, one for the elder mature crowd.

I can see myself in a club, with one girl in the corner of the dance, smooching to this tune.

Big up very nice track, i'm sure the 'Dreem Teem' will play this one.

Zero_Pro

Yeah, well to honest Im still very new to time Stratching acapellas and getting them to fit over track... So i just Picked one at random!

I will post up the instrumental in a bit, Sounds a bit boring with out vocals...

Thanks Silo
That was kinda the aim, but as I say, the acapella is far too cheesey!!

Thanks for all the feed back though!

Keep it coming

Zero_Pro

http://www.zero-productions.co.uk/instrumental.rm

Theres the instrumental for ya! Let me know what u think lee...

Its a very very mellow garage track, but thats what I was going for, suppose I just need a good acaella.. or find someone to sing on it....

But let me know what u think anyway

Rowland Samuel

Liking it but that vocal is way too cheesy.

As an instrumental it's way better.

Zero_Pro

Yeah, im really starting to regret using that vocal

But oh well... I cant really think off hand of any good acapellas to look for that would suite the track

Tempo

an acapella from an old disco track would probably go nice over it

Zero_Pro

Yeah.. might do, I think its got to be something quite mellow though, other wise it wont really go with the track...

leerees

wwill take a listen soon, i like this sort of garage, could smoke a blunt to it.

Shermon Jones

yeha, don't like the vox

quite nice mate, i'm feeling the chilledness of the intro, those rhodes are really nice.not feeling the piano on the drop, but the bass is nice.

Zero_Pro

Cheers for the feed back people!

"not feeling the piano on the drop"

Do u think the piano on the drop sounds a bit cheesy... a bit techno... I dunno, thats what was going through my mind the other day...

I did try using a Sax instead of a piano, but it wasnt working...

Shermon Jones

just don't like the sound or the notes.

also i think when it drops it should just have the bass n first rhodes or summit

Zero_Pro

It does have the first rhodes on the drop... and the bass, its just got the piano Melody over it as well...

I wouldnt want to take it out totaly... I think it would then be a bit boring, maybe work on it a bit, or change the pattern or something.