A Tune Im Currently Working On_Feedback Wanted_Thanks

Lady-Sarah

just a little somethin im working on, not to sure where to go with this one, id like a little feedback thanks




http://www.geocities.com/londonladyok/Tune1.rm

Sen

Sarah,

Finally got it to load after I copied the link into real player...

First thing - I hate dogs barking but that's just me.

The beat's okay but really repetative. Try adding some fills and change-ups. Oh, and swing it a bit more.

I like the "ohs" in the background...anyway of bringing them up in the mix?

Bassline is ok - I prefer them bouncy rather than constantly heavy - maybe inject some difference in that as well to make some varience...

Needs some more melodic elements I think.

Other than that, good effort so far! Keep it going

UK_GARAGE

Overall im feelin sounds u are using, as said above Dog Barks

aint working for the tune, up untill the bassline its melo, dog

barks are not fitting the bill.. I recon use more sounds/have more

things goin on in da tune to keep `interest` i like the vocals bring

the volume up though, i think back bass should come up slightly,

overall keep it up this could be a future dub, lol

keep at it