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A little melodic 4x4 tune from me.

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18-05-2003, 09:37 PM	#1
lady-j Fit Bird DJ Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 970	A little melodic 4x4 tune from me. right so i've done this tune and i'd like to know what you think about it http://www.dancetech.com/aa_dt_new/...t_track_id=1052

19-05-2003, 12:00 AM	#2
Zero_Pro Zero Productions Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 204	I really like it, the beats r good I think the melody sounds really nice. I think it could do with something a bit more on the Drop, just to make it come in a bit better. Also I think this would work alot better as a vocal track! If you had a good female singer on that track it would be wicked!

19-05-2003, 12:55 AM	#3
lady-j Fit Bird DJ Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 970	Gabriella is going to do the vocal for this one. We're working on it. I neglected to mention this was just an instrumental.

19-05-2003, 01:10 AM	#4
Fastlance Top Boy Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,127	i like the little vanity 6 thing you used in there

19-05-2003, 07:37 AM	#5
the_deranged_dentist The Salmon King! ;) Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 318	it may just just be me but at the begginin it seems to slow down den speed up again.... :S As Zero Pro sed would sound better as a vocal, and Gabriella is a heavy vocalist so i look forward to that. Not quite sure on the instrumental used for the melody... tho i also dont know wot would be better. Try not to make it too clustered, there are some bits where there is quite abit goin on so to speak, and with a vocal on top dere mite end up being too much. But all in all quite a nice track, lots of potential

19-05-2003, 08:37 AM	#6
Morph 2 Baad Productions Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 162	hey how ya doing we need to talk asap get me numba off n p family ok really nice tune big up Last edited by Morph : 19-05-2003 at 08:37 AM.

19-05-2003, 09:41 AM	#7
DJ-Stylus Registered User Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 459	Nice tune - can't wait to hear it with the vocals

19-05-2003, 10:36 AM	#8
leerees Your Worst Nightmare Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 433	not bad, although I'm not keen on those chords or the string sounding instrument you've used to play them they sound a bit too dancey. maybe it'll all sound wicked once the vocals are in.

19-05-2003, 06:48 PM

lady-j

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Originally posted by fast lance
i like the little vanity 6 thing you used in there
”

Can you tell i've been listening to my 80s records a lot lately? Prince, The Time, Vanity 6, SOS Band, etc...

by the way that bit was played not sampled....

19-05-2003, 06:52 PM

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lady-j

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“
Originally posted by the_deranged_dentist
it may just just be me but at the begginin it seems to slow down den speed up again.... :S As Zero Pro sed would sound better as a vocal, and Gabriella is a heavy vocalist so i look forward to that. Not quite sure on the instrumental used for the melody... tho i also dont know wot would be better. Try not to make it too clustered, there are some bits where there is quite abit goin on so to speak, and with a vocal on top dere mite end up being too much. But all in all quite a nice track, lots of potential
”

the slowing down or speeding up might be your connection to the stream. the timing of Logic is solid and i'd think i'd notice it speeding up or slowing down. as for it being busy. yes, the instrumental is since it is well, instrumental. the full vocal tune will have a little less going on in certain places to accentuate the vocal which should be the focus.

19-05-2003, 06:56 PM

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lady-j

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“
Originally posted by Morph
hey how ya doing

we need to talk asap get me numba off n p family ok

really nice tune

big up
”

thank you! how's the narrow one? i talked with Esi from Non Pence via AIM the other day. i will get it from her. As for me, ask Esi if you talk to her. She'll tell you what i'm up to. i don't want to say it on the forum.

19-05-2003, 07:00 PM	#12
lady-j Fit Bird DJ Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 970	Thanks for the tips. I will likely do some more tweaking once gabz does the vocals and everything will be in tune and sound irie.

19-05-2003, 07:02 PM	#13
DJ Enta-T Viral Messenger Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 372	love it, the piano does clutter up the track a bit, i think u know that tho, coz u quieten it down, but this is heavy, the beat is so damn good, i was boppin before the chords at the start, so many nice sounds. hats off

19-05-2003, 07:04 PM	#14
DJ Enta-T Viral Messenger Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 372	by the way, only noticed it properly since i listened a couple more times (good sign) that bass is perfect, reminds a lil of gusto for some reason. vocal mix will sell

19-05-2003, 09:38 PM	#15
tracer Firestorm Clan Soldier Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 896	the tunes soundin nang stilla... the bass sounds deep, i reckon u shud put sum more changes in there tho.. other than that its wicked!

20-05-2003, 02:35 PM	#16
Shermon Jones S.O.I 2003 Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 535	nice little number. I'm feeling it.

22-05-2003, 12:05 AM	#17
Point 5 Bad Mine Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 588	im fellin this ting WHAT DO YOU CALL THE TUNE......? I think it will make a good tune just need to fix up that bass a likkle but im sure you know your just looking for some premature feed back before you finish the tune any way sounds like a winner wondr what MJL think's..........................................?

23-05-2003, 06:37 AM	#18
DJ FRAMPSTER Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 1,974	tune is jst to damn heavay as the rest of your productions are..big up your self

24-05-2003, 02:18 PM	#19
lady-j Fit Bird DJ Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 970	thanks for all the feedback. yeh, the tune is in development and the piano bits will be thinned out or faded to the back and the bass is not complete yet. the vocal mix will be ready in the near future. i'm just doing some 'science' on it

24-05-2003, 02:34 PM	#20
Sen Da Elda Moderata Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 4,513	nice one J. heavy as always. the "clutter" factor may be sorted by a bit more tightening in the EQ departement and some slight panning variation if you're set on keeping all the elements in. Me likes. Once Gabz gets on this action, biiiiiig tings I'm right near the end - like at 4:39...and that to me actually sounds the best lol...a little less complicated = better IMO for this kind of song. Any way of making it a bit jerkier? if you get my flow...

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