4/4 Tune from me - Feedback wanted

DJ-Stylus

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Nukleuz

nice tune bro.. big up!

Flipside

Yeah, I like it mate. Another piece of good work! Keep it up. If anything though, a bit too housey for me - but safe! Like it a lot.

Flipside

Love the drop by the way, when it comes in...heavy...bouncy beats!

VIBES

sounds good but i would say it sounds a bit crammed
4-10

DJ-Stylus

crammed, how do you mean?

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the_deranged_dentist

nice tune, very begginin sounds housey tho it kiinda wears off, cant work out quite why. nice drop. THe general sound could do with being more balanced. Dont ask me how to achieve this as i am not a producer. oooooooooo nice breakdown, (just got to that part as writting) I think that was a bit of an overuse of yeaaa yeaaa at times. But generally nice use of vocals. Dont like the pads at 1.55 They themselves sound dodgy, and it also creates 2 much at the same time, dont ramjam it with sounds, keep it simple and balanced. Generally Nice tune.

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DJ FRAMPSTER

yea this is weighty geeza bigit

DJ-Stylus

I don't like the rhodes on the 2nd breakdown either - I was just too lazy to change them lol.

Thanks for all the comments

Fastlance

yeah lose the beginging pianos and that strnig thing sounds really off tune and weird but beat wise your straight

boosted

Yeah, I like it! Bring in the full beat much earlier in the intro and cut out some of those yeah yeahs like others have said. But wicked drop ... nice work.

DJ-Stylus

I'll work on it more over the weekend taking what you've all said into consideration. Thanks for all the comments

[agx]

the break sounds housey on the intro. the break is so unshuffled it practically leans to my ear and whispers: "This is a House track, Ag."

the "yeah" vox sample is overdone and doesnt really add anything to the song. Its too frequent too. and sounds like its looping on its own thing for the sake of it.

OH GOSH. u got some seriously out of key riffs man. theres a sound like a trumpet/flute and its using all the #FLAT keys I can tell. The organ riff is out of key at points.

Nice rhodes but why? They come in so late; this whole sequence is like a new song is starting. And theyre gone. Kinda pointless. Jus added for good measure it seems. I cant arrange songs cos I never make it past 2 minute loops but I know u dont bring in major instruments for 20 secs from outta nowhere. Not gunning. Tryna help ur next tune.

there isnt enuff swing in this to be defined as UKG garage, it sounds like US House from 1993. Nice idea and I like the vibe ur tryna bring back into UKG but u need to listen to a bit more 1997 ukg and hear the EQ, shuffle, riffs, arrangement, style.

aight?

i typed for 5 mins, u best take this on board!!!!!!

[agx]

UKG garage? I mean UKG. edit is long.

[agx]

btw, lock the piano and string intro. they together like that usually help a song verge on the US House, so lock em. It wud be better if u use them rhodes on the intro.

break needs fixing and swinging otherwise it jus gonna keep sounding like Todd Terry US House 1993ness.

DJ-Stylus

There is 78% shuffle on the beats! I know it sounds housey - thats what I was going for. I'll take all the comments on board though

[agx]

Ive used more than 78% shuffle on hiphop!

its all about 127% for oldskool ukg esp. 4/4 - highest for software.

Tuff jam uses 135% - hardware only.

Fastlance

"Ive used more than 78% shuffle on hiphop"

WTF are you making? The 80's is long gone bro, dont no one use more then 15% shuffle on a hiphop track,