I realise this probably isn't the appropriate place to be posting up tunes that I've made but it looks like I'm more likely to get a decent and varied response on this part of the forums rather than the A&R (or whatever) bit...
So if you've got a bit of time to spare, could ya please give this a listen and shout me some feedback, criticism, etc...
pnm://garagemusic.homestead.com/files/pumpitup.rm <--stream
http://garagemusic.homestead.com/files/pumpitup.rm <--d/load
I haven't decided what to call it yet (my mate chose the dodgy file name)!

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